Aww so cute! I totally had the feels, but why did you kill Gai?! I can't bear anyone from team Gai to die! And i cried when Gai showed up at Tenten's door asking about her. It really was such a beautiful moment. Thank you!

The last part is lit. Beautiful and heart-wrenching.

I literally cried at the end.

This was just fantastic. Tenten at her finest and worst. Gai-sensei's scene made me sad.

I kinda started crying during the last part, partly because Gai died ad because its such a bitter sweet moment. I love it.

How sweet! Loved it! Nice story. :D

~SalHappySng

That was very sweet, Tenten is a very overlooked character and only her exasperation with her teem mates is shown and never a more favorable or ineresting side of her is shown like the lonelyness she must feel as the overlooked member of teem Guy

Ah, Team Gai. They never fail to amaze me. Love their chemistry, whether in a battle, in training, or in being just plain silly.

Bawwwwwww! So sweet and sad!

God, you killed Gai. But you made NejiTen. BUT you killed Gai. I don't know if I want to kill or kiss you, but thank you anyway for this beautiful fic.

great story!

LOVE!I still do think that Tenten should have kicked Neji's ass before forgiving him for ignoring her!XP XD XD XD XD _

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ok i cried. that was too beautiful.

very very good keep writing stories:)

#$ flowergirl 13 $#

one of my favs

This is really sweet. Good job!