rereading this story for the I don't know how many-ith time and I just caufht the pearadyne reference to Blake Holesy...made me smile. I always loved that show.

Awww. So cute. Love everything.

Nice reference to the cartoon sound effects that the show had. Seeing as you can't write them into a story (not unless you got VERY detailed on what the characters were hearing), that's all you can do, and it's clever enough.

I have to admit. I was really hesitant to read this sequel. Mostly I try to avoid sequels, since the main characters are already together, the cuteness and UST aren't that big of a deal anymore... Yada yada...

This was spectacular, though. Like, insanely good, and I'm pulling such a Nora right now, because I'm nearly in tears. Your capture of the characters were on point, and I mean... Casey and Derek were just too cute! There was so much Character development for both characters, and Lizzie and Edwin, and the talent you have shown in even developing side characters such as Chris and Jack... You are so good.

I loved everything about this, even though I'm not generally a lizwin shipper. You pulled it off. You really did. This was beautiful and I just adored it! Thank you for being fabulous.

EdnaRose

And the adorableness continued! I'm so glad we got to see further character development. I loved the various cast members (especially Chris and Ralph!) and I'm so excited we got to see Lizwin happen! Thank you so much for sharing this story with us!

ha, great!

interesting concept for Ralph

Enjoyed

I loved this story! Just finished it. I hope you write more stuff :)

Aw. So perfect.

perfect writing is perfect. Lizzie and Edwin are quite immature though. I mean, I honestly thought that Derek and Casey were really trying to be helpful but they just reacted weirdly. Eh, there kids though, what can you do. but anyway PERFECT WRITING IS PERFECT.

Just found this and it's prequel and read them over the span of two days. Quite possibly the very best LWD fics I've ever had the pleasure of reading. Brilliant and perfect in every way. Bravo.

Wooo Dasey! LOVE Skipped Parts and House! :)

~Crystal

Love their Lizwin realization! Cracked me UP! LOL

Aweosme job!

~Crystal

The story was dragged out too much for my liking, I think that when a sequel turns out to be longer than the original, there's an issue. Yet as dragged out as it was, the ending felt really rushed. I know that the ending is one of the hardest parts to write, but I think that here you just sort of figured that the story was too long and so you rushed it.

Even though the length was less than ideal and the ending sped past me, the story was very well written and I found it enjoyable to read for the most part.

-La P'tite Marti