| Reviews for Harry Potter and The Ancient's Bane |
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   shunshu chapter 23 . 2/23 wow I loved the history cool |
| drucifer000 chapter 22 . 8/31/2019 MAN I just noticed it's been like 11 years since you updated this, SUCH a shame to see something this great left unfinished! Even if it was a little rushed like the ending of dying embers, it would still be better than leaving it 2/3 done... this is great work, really wish you hadn't left us all hanging! |
| drucifer000 chapter 23 . 8/31/2019 Great work! Can't wait to see what john (and everybody else) do to Lorne ha. |
| MattBlack chapter 3 . 8/11/2019 Thomas doesn't DESERVE to get his sanity back, after behaving the way he has. He even got Hermione killed and didn't have the decency of showing any kind of remorse... Let him remain in St Mungo's or die for all I care, that's all he deserve. |
| Vampyre Moon chapter 23 . 6/6/2019 oh my goodness! what a cliffy! and i see this fic has been abandoned for 11 years. goodness. i first found it when it was about 4 chapters long and loved it, but i didn't follow it. finding it now, with so much added, was a treat! i love how original this story is |
| bla chapter 1 . 2/23/2019 well 1st this is NOT "short" ... 2nd for a stargate story there is remarkabley little stargate in this chapter... |
| Elogost27549 chapter 23 . 10/2/2018 I don't recommend anyone read this story, the characters were very one dimensional and the plot was very boring. |
| CharmingButIrrational chapter 23 . 8/30/2018 Lololol cuz ofcourse the main control chair would have no defense at all. I mean why would it. Its only the most important part of the city. ... HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA |
| CharmingButIrrational chapter 21 . 8/30/2018 How did kolya escape? Lol. Also dont you know how to write consistently. Either Harry is strong enough to defeat 20 people and maintain a shield or hes a bitch who gets hurt fighting 5 muggles on the level of the genii. Seriously the fact you think Harry is more powerful than a normal wizards says enough about your lack of imagination. You even made it seem as if Harry was smart enough to copy comic book powers cuz if he was he wouldn't have had any problems with anyone. Guess i know why you quit writing. |
| CharmingButIrrational chapter 14 . 8/30/2018 Did jack really say they dont attack people for being different. I already knew Jack was white but now i know for sure your white too. HAHAHAHAH what a fucking joke. |
| CharmingButIrrational chapter 12 . 8/30/2018 HAHAHAHAHAHA holy shit. Your john sheppard is an annoying asshole and completely unreasonable. I sincerely hope he dies. |
| CharmingButIrrational chapter 10 . 8/30/2018 HAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHA |
| CharmingButIrrational chapter 8 . 8/30/2018 I have to see where this trainwreck is going. I cant stop. You know those films or tv shows that are so bad theyre kinda good. Well this is just so bad its still bad but i have to see the "end". |
| CharmingButIrrational chapter 1 . 8/30/2018 Lol really impressive that something the size of a jet can fly 2700 km/h. Ooooh. Lol dafuq. Are you fucking stupid. Thats fucking pathetic compared to a broom anyone can use thats as thing and lightweight as broom and allows you to fly 200km/h. Also fuck John. They basically stole the child and now he's talking about how hes going to keep him. Yeah well good job brainwashing him so much he didnt even want to use his magic. Cant believe i read this story in the past. Full of bullshit. |
| dkentjensen chapter 23 . 8/26/2018 more or re-write plz |
