Oh, wonderful! I'm so glad you wrote this - the seanchan fascinate me, Tuon and Selucia most of all, and you wrote them! I'm so happy :) I think you had a good grasp on their characters; we've never had a Selucia POV, but this is what she would sound like - proud, controlled, devoted. I hope you write more!

Oh yes, Selucia has much more potential than she shows. A good idea and you kept both Selucia and Toun in character... I'll be waiting for you to update!

An excellent piece of writting. I really enjoyed the fact that you felt no need to explode into some out of character plot or action packed moment of craziness. Just some carefully chosen dialogue and thought. This is as good an expose on the relationship between a so'jin and her blood as there is online.

I enjoyed it.

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I've always wanted to see something written from Selucia's POV! As usual, I think you've gotten her just right. :) I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes...

Great job! This one's going straight to the C2!