Wow, this story I can tell is the beginning of something that could easily be a fav of mine. I hope this isn't dead though, but if it is oh well. Really this could make for a very nice story. Later.

like it.

this is really good

keep up the good work

good story so far.

Loved it! Can't wait to see what's going to happen next! Hope to see more soon! ")

So I guess with that A/N at the end, I can't gush about how marvelously written this is. Yes I can. I may have given you ideas but you actually put them into some coherent shape, so great job.

I love your story! hope you update soon

well i think a jason,nathAN,LUCAS TRIANGLE WOULD BE HOT SO KEEP POSTING.

Great start! Loved it! Can't wait to see what's going to happen next! Post more soon! :)

theres not enough lathan fics out there. update plz...this is good

I thought I reviewed this but something must have gone haywire. Very different and interesting pairing. A story I will definitely keep my eye on.