A great start to a story that I wish would have continued. Read a few times, still good.

It came as surprising, I think. I never expected the AU to be so funny and cool. Yeah, it's very very far from the canon, but I think this fanfic is made very well. All the characters are created in such detail that it's amazing. Strangely, I don't really mind the fact that Naruto had a night with two females, one older than him. And he's (still?) in his puberty stage.

Just want to say that this fanfic is fantastic.

Great job please continue

brilliant to read. it truly is a shame you haven't continued this fanfiction.

I don't know what the hell kinda confusing sh!t this is I just read, so I'm just gonna pretend I was never here and continue on with my life

Nice :) I like that you touched in on coma girl a bit. Hope you are inspired and write more... though that won't stop me from looking to see if you continued this on another site :)

Wow... I'm really loving this story. I was confused a few times at first because I didn't always know who you were talking about but it didn't take long to adjust to that writing style and it actuallt fits... you have a style that jumps right in to the action or scene. It fits with the personalities of the team.

And I also must say... that fight scene with Naruto trying to save his team leader and where he used all those weapons... absolutely freakin' AWSOME! Your team dynamics are great and I love how you have a history with issues as well as current and future story conflicts already being set up. Really good story tension and progression.

Not even a 8 yr long gap?

I could care less about kakashi, no matter how excusable his part in team 19 were, he deserve naruto's ire. If I understood the situation correctly, the reason their mission failed and why naruto is angry is bacause of kakashi neglect in their training. He doesnt even try to improve his method. I can clearly say that I dont like kakashi in the anime, here or anywhere.

I really liked this. It was an interesting and original take on Naruto. Sorry it was never finished.

The interactions so beautiful.
They built up from scratch into a complex web.
Your writing is exquisite.
Thank you for leaving us this much.
If ever you decide to grace us with your presence again we will welcome you with open arms.

A good chapter

I want to say you're kind of a bastard for never continuing this. But That would be wrong and I'm sure you have better things to be doing or are dead. With that said, I would like to thank you for writing this. it is amazing, and the detail you have put into each of the characters and OC's is phenomenal, I love it. Good job and I wish you the best.

Man this was going to be a really great story. Disappointing that it didn't keep going. I could tell it wasn't going to finish but still had to read to the end.

I know it isn't a big part of the plot...but I really hope Rei is okay.