Good luck to Gildy (or whatever her name is)!

As for you, I hope you find many chocolate plot bunnies. :)

That last paragraph makes me worry for Telemain's sanity. Not that I wasn't already worrying.
Thank you for the chapter! :D

This is not dead? This is not dead! I am very happy with that. I am!

This story is truly very impressive and wonderul, by the way. I look forward to more chapters.

Ah, such puns. I like the image of a fighting, drooling, unconventional box, perfect for entertainment haha. :) Glad for the update!

Ahh! What a mean place to leave off :P Please right more! P.S. the noblewoman's name should be Corn hehehehehe :D

I'm really liking this story.

When you have one a sentence where one character speaks, followed by a sentence where another character acts, you should probably start a new paragraph between them. It makes the action a lot less confusing.

For example, this:

“What do you think you’re doing?”

Sir Roland craned his neck to look up at her without pausing.

Rather than this:

“What do you think you’re doing?” Sir Roland craned his neck to look up at her without pausing.

Okay i noticed you went from saying the princess had red-gold hair, and then in this chapter you said she had blond hair. Also mysteriously Roland regainedhis voice... Ah and the bells, haha. "Groping, she found the cloth that was only have soaked" and in this sentence i think u meant half not have )

Ok I am a little confused on soething, what wsa the errand? And what caused the dragon's claw to swell? Gildy certainly recieves some more humility in this chapter. And then when she finally gets confidence back, wham! in the head.

Lots happens in this chapter, but in a good way. it keeps you interested. I wonder if Gildy is feeling jealous of the attention Roland is recieving. Ah, and i f the wizaard has any new plots. :)

I was wondering was Sir Roland the er-fly? eatng the actaul food or just his throwup? Very good job in verbalizing a fly's thoughts, i can definitely imagine that. And as for the princess Roland deserves better. Hahahaahha

The perfect morning hahaha. I didn't realize hedgehogs were that small though, to fit in a mug. And I'm guessing "True Form" is like what kind of body fits them best or something? And thats the word she used in her promise. "Right, well, cats were-not necessarily kittens. Or Ming's." So is the MIng thing a hint of her past, or just a random comment?

"Nevermind the fact it was a bit of an accident that had cursed himstead of the wizard, everyone seemed to have forgotten about that." I think you meant to put him instead not himstead :) sometimes ithink it would be nice to see thinks through Creeper's point fo view. Oh and I love this: "Sometimes it wasn’t 'mind over matter', it was mind doesn’t matter"

I must say you did a very good job of showing Suz's personality and way of speaking. Before I had forgotten about how he acted. I would love to see the site of the wizard, a very satisfying picture. haha. But I can't help but wonder if Gildy is being a little too sure that the wizard won't be bringing any trouble...

I ALMOST feel bad for the wizard...but not quite. A very intereseting group, not a predictable one :D. I can feel the knight's frustration, forever tapping. haha and then the par where it says "Gildy to frie-" i was think "fried" instead of "friends" lol

Here we go :). I like how you start out right away with Goldy showing her skills, and THEN more of her character is introduced. Alot of this chapter makes me laugh out loud, as I'm sure you heard. I finally did notice one of those hints too. And I like Gildy's slight hesitation with th knight, I won't say names. I just hope she is not too obsessed with lockets :)