I'm really enjoying the story thus far, but I needed to comment because one line in this chapterI got misogynistic so fresh y'wouldn't believe itwas really funny to me. I know that it can get crusty and gross when exposed to air, but since miso is a fermented product the "freshest" miso would have the most shallow flavor profile and probably be really difficult to pick out when there are other flavors in the mix.
That aside, I really enjoy your writing style and the humor you weave into each chapter, especially how it balances against the more serious events. I'm certainly kept on my toes!

Really good! I love it ️️

I reread this story every year and I'm always happy with it even if it hasn't been updated in so long I love it anyway and wish there were more like it

I love this story. I hope you will add more at some point.

Please continue it

I give up. I keep hoping it gets better but it doesn't.

There is a reason most fiction started in medias res. It is to avoid situations such as your writing where the first two chapters dragged on languishly without getting to the point. It shows that you have yet to develop fully as a writer.

This story has a little something that most don't. I'm not sure what it is, but it made it very enjoyable to read. The way you write seems to fit Naruto's personality, with him flying off into tangents all the time. The humour was executed perfectly. There wasn't a case of me thinking, oh the author put that there for some comic relief. Rather, it was Naruto suddenly coming to a humourous realisation about something. They say that some writers don't make up the stories they write, they merely access another universe where the story is reality. I think that describes this story well. Unfortunately, the last update being 10 years ago doesn't leave me with any hope. Goodbye, sweet prince

Very, very promising start!

She's tell g the story and I got to the part with the lady with pale skin and dark hair and I was like...Hinata? Hinata. That's Naruto and Hinata.

Kakashi! Breaking the fourth wall! "Sometimes you gotta write for the audience."

This chapter was amazing! Thanks for being willing to write 12,800 words in one chapter.

Where you're from? Southern U.S. The fact that you say soda (I say pop) is enough.

This is your first fic and it's this great?!

plz update. really good so far. sincerely, taka