Omg I loved this story! Poor Jim he had such bad luck the first four times! lol But the last time was the best and the most romantic that it could ever have been. Excellent story!

"...but I can't stand here and watch you, watch you being you, and not do this right now."

What a perfect line. One of many, but definitely my personal favourite. This was such a lovely, sweet story that was not only remarkably in character, but also remarkably funny.

Thank you.

This was such a sweet story, and both Pam and Jim seemed to be in character the entire time.

aw, a lovely ending.

The proposal was perfect.

Jim is such a sweetie...if it's even possible this fic just made me love him more.

Great job.

omg, so sweet. i absolutely loved each and every part!

aw so so sweet and perfect.

Aw. Very nice story! Don't suppose you'd do a wedding planning/newlywed sequel? If we asked nicely? :)

Wow, I completely loved that! Great writing, and good use of humour. I loved the situations they were put in, and I loved their banter and their talks. Great job!

"...and their two young children, Stephen and Jon."

Okay. Please tell me you named them after Stephen Colbert and Jon Stewart? I remember reading another Office fic on this site that referenced the shows, too. Was that you? Aside from the Office, The Daily Show and the Colbert Report are basically all I watch.

Great story, by the way. Sorry this review sucked so much. But I seriously had to comment on that.

aw. such well-written fluff. i love it.

Absolutly marvelous. It was fun to read, well-written, and in-character. I found almost simple sentences striking and memorable.

"Her eyes asked a hundred questions, or maybe it was just the same question hundreds of times."

That was my favorite sentence. It was worded so beautifully, I half-thought I was reading a poem.

Excellent. Keep up the good work.

This story was so perfectly cute! I LOVED the part at the corn maze; it really reminded me of the show. Great job!

*claps and bes all fangirly*

SO SO good! Really Really wonderful! Great job, dear!

aw, poor jim. that's terrible. although, this is a very entertaining story, and i'm REALLY looking forward to the next chapter.

ok that was just sad (situation not writing. You're awesome) Please say jim is going to catch a break soon!