I agree with previous postings, you are a talented writer. This and A World Without Superman needs to be finished. I couldn't do anything productive while reading your stories, especially this story and the one mentioned above. You will have grateful readers if there were conclusions to these. Please!

I love the idea of Lois' body adapting to accommodate a Kryptonian baby. A much better scenario than baby of steel, woman of Kleenex. I also love the way your story deals with the unique stresses of being married to Superman in such depth!

So now that you have us on the edge of our seats, is there any chance that the next chapter is on its way?

What a shame this as well as 'A world without Superman' never got finished. Such a talented writer, I've enjoyed going through all your SV fics.

I NEED the ending! Please finish

First, you are an incredible writer! I mean this should be published! Second, in the most loving way, you are EVIL for leaving this on a cliffhanger! And last, I know I'm a few years too late, but PLEASE finish the story?

really good story :) this whole storyline could have been handled very differently. i know some writers who would have turned this into a sugary story that would have left you in a diabetic coma. but you managed to handle it maturely. Great job!
i know this is a longshot since you havent updated in, oh, FOUR years, but any chance it will get finished?

Hi,

This is a great story. Has it been discontinued? Please finish it if you have the time.

This will be added on my fave list... _

LOVE THIS and the YOAR!.. But you do realize you can not leave it there! I dont care that it's been a while since you updated this. You get back here right now and get me an update! Pleasee..*begs* this is too good!

It's been years I know but this is so darn good that I'm so upset it's incomplete. I've been yearning for a well written fic that has Clark and Lois in an established relationship that has them be an actual normal married couple so needless to say that I fell for this fic really hard. :) The first part was incredible and this was even better.

Am re-reading all your stories atm and love all of em, even the crossover with Lois and Bruce. Lois is my fav so I can't wait! Will you ever get back to this, do you think?

Thanks for sharing! :)

So I see that you haven't updated this story in well over 2yrs, but I have to tell you how much I wish this story had an ending. I'm totally hooked. This has to be one of the most well written stories I've seen on FanFiction. You're characters are so spot on, and the story development is so detailed. It's really exceptional. I just wish it continued and had a proper ending.

I said this about the prequel to this fic but it also applies here. You make the relationship between Clark and Lois so real and that's such an amazing thing. I really feel for them on a human level. Your characterization is flawless and Lois' insecurities make so much sense that my heart breaks for her. I wish you'd update. It'd make me very very happy.

Great job:D

Brilliant so far! Really hope you update this one soon :)

I like this, sad it hasn't been updated.

Such a great story. I'm excited as to where you're going to take this next. I was really captivated by Lois discovering her powers and the growth of the baby is proving to be an interesting side story too. Please update soon! I'm really enjoying your work.