That was *blinks* confusifying. Although that may just be me. *re reads*

Loved it ] Good job.

*sniff* so sad! There is a great conflict! yay! I mean... this is a sad story... um... *cry* good job though!

~AngelFire 13

Very good. Never did read the book anyway, I just scrounge up miscellaneous information from the various fanfics I read. Keep up the good work in regards to one-shots.

And as I read this story, the TV: "These dastardly deeds will not go unpunished." Heh.

I liked it, a lot! Especially the end, that was really good and twisty.

Oh, /eerie/! Wow... I haven't even gotten that far in the book and I understand the plot impact to that. Wow, I say again. Bookverse is so much more serious than Musicalverse... Except this is Booksical, so I would say it suits my tastes best. Great job, working in 'No Good Deed' into the story itself. Heh... Lord Chuffery was at a performance of Wicked. I find that ironic. Good oneshot! -LostOzian

Wow.

...Dark. I liked your word choice, you have an astounding vocabulary. It was a bit confusing in places though, like the train of thought was a bit jerky. Other than that, good job.

OMG, I get to be the first person to review ur story!

Very well-written, I loved your descriptiveness!

Elphaba seems to have a deep sense of purpose, and knowledge of what she has to do. I really like the way you project that.

Oh, thanxs for reviewing the Sound of Sweeney, and excellent fic!

"More book than sical."

...And that is exactly why I love you so. :P

But so anyway, on to the story. I'll admit that it wasn't one of my favorites from you - trying to decipher her own musical "words" just didn't work for me. In my humble and meager opinion, it detracted from the seriousness of the story. Maybe it's just the kind of mood I'm in; I don't know.

And because I'm feeling nitpicky ("It's not you, it's me" :P), I would have preferred an explanation as to why he had to die. And then...and then...I just didn't think the whole "no good deed" thing fit this story. Sorry, I don't mean to be rude/harsh/et cetera, but...yeah.