Reviews for Master of Puppets, Demolition Chief |
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![]() ![]() ![]() why the fck he return to konoha?,,, and become slave for council, hokage and civilians |
![]() ![]() Please update, I love it |
![]() ![]() This was such a great story I'm sad now |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great work |
![]() ![]() Awwwww! |
![]() ![]() Lol I did recognize the heist from oceans 12 I started laughing my ass off |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved it until the oc but i loved how u portrayed naruto's little group and this story is hilarious. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that was fun. Iiked it. Uchiha oc needs to get laid? Is it strange that I want to see her and kakashi get super kinky like out of the most disterbing wired violent preveres mind the love triangle of kakashi anko and her get into some next level kinky. Could be funny to write some wired random stuff Involving tuna a clown cream cheese and bandage. I didn't predicurly dis like anything but I'd like to see why sauske changed targets and I have a fealing that he was exposed to some twisted kinky shit in the genjutsu like his antie having sex with arty while his song played in the a endless loop. |
![]() ![]() No. Just no. Characters are too ooc and the 'humor' in this story is lacking. The constant use of Japanese is also extremely annoying because you didn't even put translations. Terrible start. I hope you someday come back to this and redo it since it does have potential. |
![]() ![]() Sasori is making me cringe so hard in this story, why did you have to make him so out of character? Deidara isn't TOO bad but he's pretty much ooc as well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wish you would finish this story. It was amazing |
![]() ![]() lameass story |
![]() ![]() You know it's like 12:30 in the morning and I'm reading this and it's hilarious and it is soooo hard not to laugh and wake everyone in the house up good job |
![]() ![]() ![]() a reference fromfuturama"? |