Reviews for Master of Puppets, Demolition Chief |
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PrimeEmperor chapter 2 . 7/14 why the fck he return to konoha?,,, and become slave for council, hokage and civilians |
Guest chapter 8 . 8/24/2019 Please update, I love it |
lugia chapter 8 . 7/5/2019 This was such a great story I'm sad now |
Monster King chapter 8 . 11/17/2018 Great work |
Bloodclaw1 chapter 1 . 8/17/2018 Awwwww! |
Guest chapter 3 . 8/12/2018 Lol I did recognize the heist from oceans 12 I started laughing my ass off |
blackswordsman2477 chapter 7 . 9/23/2017 i loved it until the oc but i loved how u portrayed naruto's little group and this story is hilarious. |
Cao510 chapter 4 . 8/27/2017 I love it! |
Blazing heart frigid soul chapter 8 . 3/13/2017 Well that was fun. Iiked it. Uchiha oc needs to get laid? Is it strange that I want to see her and kakashi get super kinky like out of the most disterbing wired violent preveres mind the love triangle of kakashi anko and her get into some next level kinky. Could be funny to write some wired random stuff Involving tuna a clown cream cheese and bandage. I didn't predicurly dis like anything but I'd like to see why sauske changed targets and I have a fealing that he was exposed to some twisted kinky shit in the genjutsu like his antie having sex with arty while his song played in the a endless loop. |
Guest chapter 2 . 10/10/2016 No. Just no. Characters are too ooc and the 'humor' in this story is lacking. The constant use of Japanese is also extremely annoying because you didn't even put translations. Terrible start. I hope you someday come back to this and redo it since it does have potential. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/10/2016 Sasori is making me cringe so hard in this story, why did you have to make him so out of character? Deidara isn't TOO bad but he's pretty much ooc as well. |
Leroy-San chapter 1 . 8/31/2016 I wish you would finish this story. It was amazing |
kuramakimg chapter 8 . 7/7/2016 lameass story |
Jj chapter 4 . 5/26/2016 You know it's like 12:30 in the morning and I'm reading this and it's hilarious and it is soooo hard not to laugh and wake everyone in the house up good job |
bmagana595 chapter 8 . 1/20/2016 a reference fromfuturama"? |