I know you've put a lot of time and effort into this story. But the Kakasaku here is a prime example of how relationships should not be. Manipulations, disregard for the other party's feelings, lack of trust, and infidelity.

First off can I say your rendition of Sakura is so much like myself it’s scary. There’s hardly any characters with her personality both in and out of fan fiction and seeing her like this is beyond amazing. She’s a rarity and I love it

I've thought through the whole series that Naruto and Sasuke were meant for each other actually. So many heavy hints haha it's glaringly obvious and the canon pairings are just insulting

I relate to your version of Sakura way to much. I have many of the the same hang-ups about relationships and tend to act exactly the same. Honestly, the psychology about the way he proposed a the second time is probably the only way a proposal would work on me if anybody could ever get close enough for it to happen

Well, it was good enough that I read to the very end. :)
that is an accomplishment.
I was amused, I was sad, I was happy, I giggled, I was disappointed, I was turned off, I was unhappy...
You did a great job of taking me along a long and winding path.
Well done.

nope... not happy about actual or suggested infidelity...

hahaha... Temari is a slut... how funny.

that conversation made perfect sense in the way it unfolded. I can see glaring misunderstandings on both sides. :D
She DID tell him that she didn't believe in romance when she agreed to marry him.
and he is most certainly emotionally and socially stunted from his screwed up family upbringing. LOL
Well done.

Oh my god...Naruto banged the brakes off of Temari...you've no idea how hard I laughed...well done.

that was good!

that end was hillarious!

that was evil of you!

i love this!

at least he has some sense!

Good but to focused on the other characters