Reviews for Bleach White |
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blackorchid143 chapter 1 . 10/25/2007 Oh God! I love death fics! XD Your story is really nice... |
The Blue Penguin chapter 1 . 6/29/2007 0_0 Tezuka died? *sobs* Why? Anyway, this story was really beautiful! I enjoyed reading it very much! The scenario, the descriptions, the atmosphere, the emotions, they all come together perfectly! And Fuji! Gah! I liked how you described him in Tezuka's perspective! Really nice! Great job! |
Roseability chapter 1 . 6/29/2007 What a nice story. It's too bad Tezuka dying... wahh! Fuji is awesome, too. |
ketchupblood chapter 1 . 6/29/2007 WHY MUST I CLICK? WHHY! -through tears- This was, as usual, really nice. Except for the part about Tezuka dying. That wasn't so nice, though I suppose you couldn't have helped it. -sigh- How about you kill someone not Tezuka or Fuji and have them help each other through it? Or maybe have one of them commit murder - Mizuki's a likely subject, I'm sure. -snuggles poor dead!Tezuka- Ah, just one small typo: "The thing was, Fuji knew that when he claimed he wasn't in pain, that he [way slying.]" Ah, and my muse's spirit tells me that it doesn't appreciate being poked with a stick and it's very disrespectful towards the dead. Oh, hey! How about just a deathfic for my muse? No need to kill either Tezuka OR Fuji, then! - |