I honestly enjoyed this roller coaster of a story.

It’s crazy, fun and full of interesting plot twists (Like Toa Lhikan being a Dark Hunter). Or Shatna being the adopted sister of Vakama, then our Vakama meeting his deploganger.

I would kill for a sequel if you ever decide to write one!

Could use some major editing but somebody should send this to our lord and saviour Graig Frieshtey.

Have a nice day and stay awesome!

I honestly enjoyed this roller coaster of a story.

It’s crazy, fun and full of interesting plot twists (Like Toa Lhikan being a Dark Hunter). Or Shatna being the adopted sister of Vakama, then our Vakama meeting his deploganger.

I would kill for a sequel if you ever decide to write one!

Could use some major editing but somebody should send this to our lord and saviour Graig Frieshtey.

Have a nice day and stay awesome!

this is honestly the best stuff ever I absolutely love ever chapter no matter the length I think ur an amazing writer

Could you please fix/remove this chapter? It's exactly the same as the first.

Nnnnooooooo Jalik! I liked the bugger to!(after like the second time he popped up) Curse you writter curse you! -cries- hero Jalik dead and the matoran...WWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
:'(

Hello Sylla Shadowfrost I am Frost-747 and want to say to you that em I please very much your history, very buenaa become corrupted reading XD, also eh several of your fics are brilliant it is still like that;) I wait with anxieties for another Bionicle's fic since I am very a fan of them regards!

So far, good. hope you have a decent ending planned though.

Great story so far.

wow, I'm really sad that it's over! i kind of wish that there was more (though the Toa Metru are probably glad that it's over :)

I like the epilogue ending, Sayla is really fun. he he, Kopaka would be impatient about that...

you... killed...Nidhiki...i'm still in shock...

this is an amazing story. poor Nuju... I really like it, I've been reading it nearly nonstop all day. It's really amazing.

Cool... :D

I really am happy with this, and even more wonderful- you kept me occupied for... what... 4 days that I actually read things. Thanks! Now I get to go and check to see if you've updated the other story- can't remember it's title though. Darned brain. But again, loved the fic.

Nice. Slightly sappy ending, but hey. You DID list it as romance, somewhere in there. So I can't really complain. :P

I am really wanting to read teh epilouge. Onwards!

No! D:

The matoran died... and Jalik of course. Guess I'm not allowed to forget him... And Lariska's dead, too! Actually, I barely know who she is- there's only so much info on the internet, and even less canon writing that shows you their characters. :(

But, yeah. Next chapter. Hopefully a more detailed review next, but I can't promise anything. 5 hours of sleep does weird things to your mind...

And we have a view of the other side! Yays! And I REALLY need to figure out who Nidhiki is. But I'm too lazy. Yeah.

Anyway, I might be skipping a couple of chapters merely because I really want to finish this, and every time I review I have to think a bit to get back into the story. I'd much rather keep it flowing. But I WILL still review. :P

Happy huh? It seems every good auther has been taken by insanity... ;P It does feel like filler though, so I'm going to the nest chapter.