Reviews for Burnt |
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TVaficianada chapter 1 . 7/8/2007 Very believable situation; just a sweet and funny story. Thanks for this unusual holiday themed story. |
jessspider chapter 1 . 7/4/2007 Brilliant, I was cracking up with laughter at Ray and Neela's reactions! The dialogue was well written and just so funny. She's really frustrated with him cos he's walking around without his shirt right lol...it may be true that she's annoyed with his 'stupidity'...but alas...perhaps its just the front she's putting on. :) Please continue...can't wait to follow this story. It was so real. |
starryjen chapter 1 . 7/3/2007 Nice bit of roomieness, simple and free of all the current angst |
Moonlight Enchantments chapter 1 . 7/3/2007 AW that was so cute! loved loved loved it! more? |
xotucker chapter 1 . 7/3/2007 Very, very sweet! And so Roomie-like! |
Mica86 chapter 1 . 7/3/2007 That was great! So sweet... I like, that this storys is not about all the "bad" things, that happend at the show, but a scene from happier roomie-times :) I hope there'll be more fanfics! |
CarbyLivesOn chapter 1 . 7/2/2007 very cute. |
siddika chapter 1 . 7/2/2007 Very good job. |
Sandalwood1 chapter 1 . 7/2/2007 Aww, this was sweet. Believable, too! Update soon. |
AshCarroll aka ShadowDiva chapter 1 . 7/2/2007 Aw! I loved this. Seemed so true to the characters we know, especially at this stage of the canon. Great dialogue, and boy, I feel you on the sunburn, Ray. Have had some lovely ones myself. Ugh. |