Reviews for Burnt
TVaficianada chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
Very believable situation; just a sweet and funny story. Thanks for this unusual holiday themed story.
jessspider chapter 1 . 7/4/2007
Brilliant, I was cracking up with laughter at Ray and Neela's reactions! The dialogue was well written and just so funny. She's really frustrated with him cos he's walking around without his shirt right lol...it may be true that she's annoyed with his 'stupidity'...but alas...perhaps its just the front she's putting on. :) Please continue...can't wait to follow this story. It was so real.
starryjen chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
Nice bit of roomieness, simple and free of all the current angst
Moonlight Enchantments chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
AW

that was so cute!

loved loved loved it!

more?
xotucker chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
Very, very sweet! And so Roomie-like!
Mica86 chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
That was great! So sweet...

I like, that this storys is not about all the "bad" things, that happend at the show, but a scene from happier roomie-times :)

I hope there'll be more fanfics!
CarbyLivesOn chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
very cute.
siddika chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
Very good job.
Sandalwood1 chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
Aww, this was sweet. Believable, too! Update soon.
AshCarroll aka ShadowDiva chapter 1 . 7/2/2007
Aw! I loved this. Seemed so true to the characters we know, especially at this stage of the canon. Great dialogue, and boy, I feel you on the sunburn, Ray. Have had some lovely ones myself. Ugh.