Nice! Would’ve preferred more torture scenes tho, oh well..

Ok, yeah. I loved this.

A Gil Grissom wannabe? You watch CSI too? I love the TV series!

Anyways, I love how you added in the shows humor to the story. I really like this so far. :D

LOL! I was vair confused at the bit with all the alternate endings until I realised what was happening, but it was very clever, carrying on the dark humour of the whole fic.

I loved that Jim got Pam's name on his chest and I really liked how you made Karen a bit human under all the crazyness.

Brilliant fic!

:D

I loved this.

classic. i applaud you. totally hilarious!

That was awesome! I loved it, especially the Wayne's World approach to the ending!

very weird and funny.

Love the lines "Maybe someday I'll find my own Pam" and "Pam, for some reason, was giggling like an idiot." It took me a minute to remember what the reference was , but I agree with Pam, for some reason that was really funny. Love the alternative endings, also.

Always end the story with a Wayne's World approach.

Although... no Scooby-Doo ending? Where Karen turns out to be Old Man Jenkins? :P

My favorite was the Stephen King ending. I read the book.

Yay! Great ending! Good luck in your next story!

What to say about this one?

There are those who would look at a chapter like and complain about watching Buffy and the Simpsons did to a generation of writers... however I'm of that generation, so I say good show. Funny, violent, and you even managed to work in a lesbian kiss. you know, when Pam came in and saw Jim strapped to the torture table, I half expected you to have her join in. wait a second... why didn't you? Man, this could have been a VERY different story for a moment there. Seriously, though, beyond all the craziness, this really is a well-written piece and I'm glad to see you getting back to it. I hope you'll reassert yourself with the Office fiction community soon, but, hey, even I'm not feeling it like I used to so I can hardly blame you. Nice work, though.

Oh my gosh.

Never in my life have I been so afraid of a TV's characters safety in a FF as I have been with this one.

Didn't occur to him? Didn't occur to him? Pam should kill him herself for that. She'd get off scot-free, too; Karen would be the one to take the blame for that.