YES! A sequel! I loved the original so much, that when I have to write about my own OC (Herry's girlfriend), that I can't think of much, because I'm so involved with the idea of your character (Calli)! Can't wait to read the rest, might not get to it all today but you bet that I'll finish it!

Brilliant story i am just wondering if you could make another one to lead

onto this one where Atlanta has her baby and more of Theresa and Jay and the couples get married i would definantly add it to my favorites. :)

That was awesome! I remember thinking back to the time when I was reading this, and wondering if you were ever going to finish it. And thankfully, you did!

Great job(:

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THE F!

IT'S OVER!

Yeah, the dots up ther symbolize the time it took for me to get over the epic, and figure out how to write you a review even partially worthy of it's magnificance. And so far I'm not doing a good job, I hope you're comfy lovey, because you're in for a ride. Pull up a chair, or maybe a bed. Not a bunk bed that scares the crap out of Nudemania, rather the bed that hides the stuff I worship you with...

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That sounded dirty. JUST BEING ME. tehe.

Know what else has been a ride? (No, not Cronus across the winds of time) This story. Well, more of a fairytale, with the happily-ever-after. A dark angsty fable, that I wouldn't change for the world.

Or Archie, which, let's face it, is like the reason the world exists.

I have trouble, as you know, completing stories, and just the fact that you completed not one, but TWO is a feat in itself, but how you made each of them so similar, yet different. The aspects of fantasy and reality that you blended, and made them FANTASY with REALism within it. I could both see this new world, and be able to see myself in it.

And the character developement. You know. First Meurte-Archie-Danaya complex and the others. And then deaths, that brought about NEW developements. Oh, and of course Mellian, who is adorable and dark. Pst, new developements. ie. Neil.

BUT SOME CHARACTERS SHOULD NEVER EXPLORE THE BOUNDRIES OF DEVELOPEMENT. IT IS DANGEROUS. NOT JUST FOR ANGSTY WANSTY THANKSY SIDE-AFFECTS. BUT FOR.. UM.

IONNO, JAY DECAPATATIONS AND AGING THERESA.

But happy day of joy and visits! They end up together! And as dark, Manya-angst Gods. WITH AN AGING KID (I sense a little Twilight within your story as well cherie. YOU CANNOT ESCAPE IT. I watch for these things like Simba watching children make-out in fields. I search for them, like that one special pebble xD. GOODNESS GLACIERS GNU. haha, three gs)

RIGHT, so. Want to know what makes me both sad and happy here? Besides finger spasms of both joy and pain from this review, and ending of IIWI D:?

ARCHIE AND ATLANTA DID IT xD

Non-descript, but you, they did. OHYEAH. THEY GOT IT ON. whooho. Sims xD. YAY.

So...

basically, like, sexed it :3

Okay, done now.

But what better ending can you get than that? Vampirism? Immortality? Back from the dead (or, pulled a Theresa)? Being CHOPPED UP BY CRONUS, WHO LOVES INTESTINES? *cough* No.

Just babymakin.

The only other possible thing to compare to that, is you ;D.

BECAUSE I LURVE YOU

And will miss this story, and wait for epics to you.

LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE

you are. amazing.

Period.

Adoring you always,

Nuu

Oh My God!

i love this story! its sad that it has to end... but i guess its like every good book/story you never want them to end but you wanna know how it ends!

i liked the way how theresa concluded it and it didn't jump all over the place. plus even though i like AxA stuff more than JxT stuuf i think you ended this really well as theresa and jays situation was way more important to conclude! after all archie and atlanta didnt die.. so yeah greta ending, really looking forward to your next story! i think i'm starting to ramble on a bit... (just a little)

anyways, loved the epilogue, loved the story! keep writing your stories are amazing!

...Invisible-nobody...

That was so sad, confusing, but abosulty brilliant. And hay! I know the twist, that the others can still visit Jay and Theresa beacuse they always visit the gods... At least everyone got thier happy ending... Or did they? Please hurry up and update soon, I love this story.

hey,

that chapter was so up and down... one moment its all good then theres death and sadness and then i guess you could call it more happiness but sadness at the same time... if that made any sense..?

anyways... i loved it and this story is definately one of my favs i love your writing looking forward to the epilogue and other stories from you!

...Invisible-Nobody...

AAUUGB;SBJV AS;LKBDVALSFB;

WHAT HAVE YOU DONE? WHATT HAVVEE YOUU DONNE?

I thought -I- had the most gruesome Jay scene, like, ripping off his face and all, BUT THIS WAS RE-DONK-U-LOUS.

It started off so nice, like, THEY FINALLY WERE CLEAN.

AND SALDKIVBASLDVBALSDV DANAYA! SUCH HAPPY-MAKING THINGS.

"You missed."

Curses, Cronus. I was joping you were gone and the kids could be HAPPY now and ESCAPE this ETERNAL ANGSTPIT Anya's put them through (but in an incredibly wonderful way)

And the battle was epic, with Atlanta getting her revenge, us readers knowing this HAD to be the end. Cronus was going to fall, EVERYTHING WAS GOING TO BE JOLLY AND HAPPY.

And then you cut Jay in half.

WAY TO KILL THE MOOD. AND THE MAN.

And it wasn't even a glorified stab, no YOU RIP HIM IN HALF. GRAPHICALLY.

D: I cried.

THEN YOU MOCK HIM WITH HIS LAST-EFFORT ATTACK. Which usually WORKS in most writing so we're all 'with his last effort, HE DEFEATED CRONUS EVEN THOUGH HE WAS IN TWO PIECES.'

but no, Jay miissees.

It's horribly funny, pathetic and heartbreaking at the same time.

And it was so well-written that I loved it as much as I couldn't stand to read Jay dying. And Theresa's anguish and despair, trying to draw in some magic. I swear I thought she was going to do it, to break past the 'barriers'/'walls' of her emptiness and like, practically kill herself with magic, defeat Cronus, bring Jay back to life (and back together) and be young again and everything was going to be wonderful and happy.

But that didn't happen, instead you tricked us and Theresa had to stick to the 'truth' of the world and pick up Jay's sword and FIGHT like the heartbroken, aging, beautiful fighter she is.

And you go and rub our noses in the fact Jay's dead when Cronus friggin' SLIPS on Jay's INTESTINES.

And THAT'S how Theresa get's the upper hand on him. In the end Jay DID help defeat Cronus, and it was his and Theresa's combined efforts that stopped him xDD

...that was a terrible way to sum it up, but it's truee.

And then Persephone and Hades show up and I was like GOODNESS GLACIERS! MORE PEOPLE HAVE TO DIE?

And then Persephone drops the bombshell with her whole "I acutally loved you this whole time and you're free to go."

And it was wonderful and happy because ODIE SO TOLD HADES OFF AND I WAS LIKE "YES! WAY TO GO FRO-FRO!"

And as happy as this all was, I'm still torn up by Jay's death (...pun wasn't intended there) AND Cronus's horrible defeat by Jay's intestinals.

Theresa was just so broken, I KNEW there was no way she was going to survive Jay for much longer, I mean, she was already aging like all get out. She probably didn't want to be the old, cat lady beating Archie with her cane when he tried to go to a strip club for his stag party xDD

It was a tragically happy ending and that last line 'Persephone was killing her, and taking her to Jay.'

It's so WONDERFUL AND EPIC. LIKE EPIC IN EPIC PROPORTIONS.

HOLY COW, ANYA.

YOUU ARREE NOT ONE OF US.

YOU'RE TO GOOD TO BEE ONNEE OF US!

You know how much I friggin' adore this story, and you and your writing. This was an AMAZING ending, and even in the LAST chapter you left me wanting MORE MORE MORE, and pulled twists I didn't even see coming.

I can't wait to read the eppilogue and your future writing. You have so many great ideas.

-King Dem

wow...

i have been waiting for an update on this story, and what an update it was!

please add another update... even though i don't really want this stroy to end coz its so intriging but i guess i need to find out what happens some time...

anyways loved the chapter, love the story... please update and when you finish this story don't hesitate to start another!

...Invisible-Nobody...

Aghh! Suspense! Lovin' this though! As usual, of course.

Poor, poor Neil...I hope that he can somehow mend his broken heart...

Great chapter! The emotions and descriptions are easily readable, and yet intriging and well-written :)

Keep up the goor work!

-Dragon

Do I sense a Theresa centric chapter? I think I do, and I think that even leaving Neil (partially) and Archie behind for a second, you still retain the Angst o' Duchess of Angst and Nudemania's new weather girl. The forecast? Clouds of ANGST and sometimes fluff 24/7!

I said angst a lot back there...

ANGST.

ANGST.

whooho!

WELL, ANYWAYS. The writing was beautiful, and you know that you astonish me everyday of my LIFE. We should make a T-Shirt saying just how great you are ;D

NOW. So Theresa used her last reserve, eh? OH, STUPID JAY. JUST CUZ YOU NEEDED LOVE? NO. No love for Jay! Go fall down a hill for about 20 minutes straight and make Nuu and Anya die laughing in hysteria at 4 in the morning!

But whoa, so what's going to happen to Theresa? Will her mother find a way to spare her life? I know you told me part of this xD, but still.

OKAY. LONG REVIEW FOR YOU PRETTY LADY.

MISS YOU WHILE I'M GONE!

~ Nuuoiie

Whoa. A lot happened.

I like the roses. Interesting visual.

AND I SEE WHAT THERESA'S EYES CAN DO NOW.

...no pun intended xD

Theresa's powers (inspired by the finale?) and the description of her building up her power were awesome.

And Cronus sitting in the castle with the scythe and the rose, on the throne. VIVID PICTURE OF EPIC. I love it when Cronus looks the insane badass he's meant to be.

Whoa. Go Theresa. KABOOM AND WE WIN. I hope.

...Cronus is still alive, isn't he? He's going to come back, and he's going to do something bad.

D: aw, Theresa and her mom was a very touching moment. Bittersweet, I guess.

And the Cursed Gift to Neil was... again, bittersweet.

You have such a great way of writing such sweet things into horrible, terrible, heart-wrenching moments.

Those last lines fit together so nicely to leave a feeling of dread that I NEED YOU TO UPDATE NOW.

Pleease?

-Demenior

I like the way you start this. Bringing us back to Theresa's crazy eyes.

D: and ow sounds painful.

'if only to tell Jay that she had always loved him' Such a good line Anya.

D: oh Theresa. Don't TRY to be the bearer of bad news.

I like how she can see the life force though. Adds a new bit of depth to her visison.

...she has like 20undead/20 vision xD

Aw, poor Jay. GET ARCHIE TO TEACH YOU TOO. GO BADASS FOR ME JAY. PLEEAASSE.

...they're in their tent. And very happy *coughcough* WHAT'S GOIN' ON WITH THE VAMPS?

I love how they're travelling with two vampires and yet Archie and Neil are killing them for sport.

._. WHO'S THERE?

...crroonuus?

D: aw, that picture is very saddening. I can actually feel the change of Danaya's Neil to this Neil.

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DANAYA. COME BACK. COME GET NEIIL.

D: NOES. SHE COULD NEVER HATE NEIL. NEVVAAR.

SHE'S HERE TO BRING HIM BACK. MAKE HIM HAPPY AGAIN.

D: ARCHIE. I'LL GET THE POLYSPORIN. AND BANDAIDS. BATMAN ONES.

I can even imagine what's going through his head as he's setting Neil down. I can see it so perfectly in my head. You did a really good job describing it.

Oh Archie. You suck at comforting people. You're gentle, then a jerk, then expect them to be nice about it D:

I love you for that xD

Good call Theresa. Poor Neil, give him all the peace you possibly can.

Ouch.

Very nice way of ending Theresa's segment. Repeats the fact that they are in a terrible, horrible place.

Whoa, crazy mood shift here.

I can totally feel this is a dream. It's insane in the membrane.

D: THEY'RE SO HAPPY AND I KNOW IT'S NOT TRUE BUT I WANT IT TO BE.

D: we came back to reality so fast it hurts. Poor, poor Neil. You're connecting the 'two' Neil's very well- with the desire to keep himself looking good and the Neil that has just given up.

Oh poor Neil. WHY CAN'T HE JUST HAVE A BREAK?

and Jay. I hope something great happens for him and he gets his chance to shine. He's been so helpless lately D:

LORDY. WILL NEIL'S ANGST EVER LET UP?

Or is he forever going to be drenched by the angst storm cloud? D:

D: GEZE ANYA.

DO YOU WANT ME TO CRY?

This was a great chapter- and ASLKDVB THEY'RE OFF TO GET CRONUS SON. I hope they get him and end this once and for all 8D

...somehow I get the feeling either Neil's going to die or Danaya will return.

I just want them to be together. REALLY BAD.

HURRY AND UPDATE SOON. CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE.

-Dem

Lol. I know i said i wasn't going to review each chapter, but I jsut had to mention: Disney movies! Aladdin is one of my faves :D Am loving the story by the way...