I have thoroughly enjoyed lingering over this fic. Thank you so much for writing it. I'm interested to see if Cathy can get through the trials of that cave beneath Don Diego's hacienda. I'm desperately keen to see how things work out with Poppy.

Thank you, SO MUCH, for writing this. So much. Thank you.

Yes, I read the chapter rather than going to sleep. But I COULD NOT stop at the end of chapter 8. It was an impossibility! This chapter, this chapter I can probably close my eyes after, in a satisfied way. Like, yeah, arc complete. This is good.

Also, that line about cheese you could make a taco from? Perfection surrounded by gold.

Thank you for writing this. I have loved all of it, and I anticipate loving more of it in the day-time. THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUU!

Okay, it's 2.41 in the AM where I am, and I need to go to sleep, but I WANT to read the next chapter because that? That chapter ending? THAT WAS GOLD! Thank you so much for writing this. It's all over awesome but I nearly cheered aloud - only not wanting to wake the folks down the hall kept it a hoarse whisper of a noise.

Xander is related to ZORRO! YES! Oh my gosh I love this. I love this all over. Thank you. Thank you. Fifty times. A hundred. I love it.

And the Xander wank goes on and on.

this was quite fun, a little too 'power of the chapter' maybe, but a nice different take on the character's life before the show.

thanks for sharing

Blessing the water in firetrucks is awesome! Very creative! Really enjoying the story.

I think we need to hire these Minotaurs in great numbers, then usher them into every governmental chamber, and lock all the exits.

Great story! Honestly, one of the best out there in the Buffy fandom, though to be honest most of the competition comes from dodgerobert who you apparently work with, so there’s that. I was sorry to read about the cyber bullying you have been through, based on Authors comments in your more recent stories, that kind of shit just isn’t right. I hope that doesn’t destroy your love for writing, and I was very glad to see you start again, so hopefully the trend continues. Do what makes you happy, I’d love to see another chapter here, but if you gotta walk away then walk away. It’s been a real pleasure reading your work!

Good fic. Wish you continue it though

When are you going to update this story?

Please more...this is Great.

They were full of crap.. This is a fun read...

Your stories are very well done and I've reread them multiple times. I was wondering if you were ever going to write more chapters of the story? If you do I would love to read them. I just wanted to say thank you for writing such wonderful stories they really helped me out mentally and even if you don't continue this story, and the others I will still re-read them multiple times in the future.

An excellent story though it lost something (for me at least) after the Balrog attack. While not enough to make it a bad story honestly it felt like you'd decided you'd given them too much power and wanted to reset them to a lower level but didn't know how so just had the bad guys Drop a Nuke on them. After which they had to keep low and not be as effective. Rather like the canon crew following Buffy around.
Still a GREAT Story until that point and it is too bad it was never finished.

Sicking a Bulrug on them at this stage seems like overkill honestly. Especially as its summoners aren't around to be killed.
It is possible to go TOO BIG you know.