wow.. all your jily stories are your writing

I need more lilli and james...wright more

So adorable!

hmm. you seem rather conceited. just kidding, no worries. you are awesome. this was one of my favorite LJ one-shot-fics. I feed on jealous Lily's. :)

:D love it

I LOVE IT! :D

Very cute story! Awesome job!

Sweet!

Hey there, lannah! :)

I've read so many Lily/James-fics (working voluntarily for a German FF-site)that I sometimes just think "Oh my God, can't you think of something NEW just once?" Now that I'm running through my favorites list, I recognize that my favorites are all quite the same, too. That's why I really need to comment on your Oneshot:

Your story is somehow new, it's special. :)

It's not customary,touchy Lily the know-it-all and James, the boy that never ever stops asking, but just Lily and James. :) Due to her crush on James and the sweet squiecking-thing, Lily is vulnerable and not just "Miss Perfect".

Moreover I simply like your writing style. :)You succeed in interlacing a joke every few lines, so reading never gets boring.

I have the impression that you manage a good mean in between too colloquial ("Urg, what fucking dumbass put his togs here, huh?" :D) and too artificial language("James, would you please be quiet!"). Hmm, one could think that I can't judge that as I'm no native speaker, but I know that both extremes exist and that I really don't like them. *grin*

So, thanks for this special Oneshot. :) I guess I'll read through your other stories tomorrow, too. :)

Regards,

Am1ra

your story is amazing.

AWWWWWW! that was cute! I like how she was like All squeky when she lied

this was so cute! well done :)

Longer please? It was really very good and I did not want it to end. Maybe start writing an actual story? I love your work.

hmm...u write the best stories.

best part: where they argue so much, it's almost like foreplay

It was very cute!