This was so wonderful! I love Ian and I'm so very glad you captured him perfectly! Your writing makes it effortless to hear their voices. That's one of the most important aspects of a fanfiction story to me. Thank you and G-d bless you!

This is ingenious! Hands-down. My ultimate favorite fiction here. Too perfect for words.

-LA

Lisa, you are a phenomenal writer! This story was exceptional, as usual, but, it felt very different - more edgy, more dark. Having it told from Edgerton's point of view gave a unique, and, very enlightening perspective of the Brothers Eppes.

And yet it seems as if he collected the Eppes' as some kind of friends/brothers on the way and I doubt he will be able to get rid of them even if he tried. xDDD
Damn Charlie and Don (and Alan) xD
I really would like to know if Ian would end up at the Eppes's home again if he had to work at the LA FBI again.
Thanks for sharing your story. I loved it.
Ebenbild

I adore this pairing, and I adored this story.

Absolutely fascinating and absolutely fantastic.

Well, that kept me entertained. :)
All the characters felt just right in this story.

That was fascinating. I really loved your take on Ian.

Different and good perspective of Edgerton. He is a lonely man but chooses to be this way - or does he?

Bambi is the right way to put it!

And I know Edgerton won't do it, but somebody needs to give Charlie a hug!

That was a really interesting change, I loved 'seeing' Don and Charlie and their relationship through Ian's eyes and listening to his internal dialogue was both entertaining and enlightening.

Everyone was completely in character and despite the seriousness there was still enough humour to make me smile more than once.

I always liked Ian, and the way he interacted with the boys whenever he dropped by, so I really enjoyed this.

An interesting story and very well written.

I love reading from Ian's point of view. He is behind the Eppes brothers as my favourite character. Brilliant. Thanks for posting. :)

Very good fic and very good idea to write a fic focused on Ian... but why don't you note his name in presentation?

That was... different. In a good way. I particularly liked the last line - it was perfect, I think.

I loved how he looked after Charlie, even if he was a bit harsh at times. He seemed quite sweet once he stopped being quite so detached.

I'm gonna have to go watch sniper zero again now, damnit.