Where is duh lemon? I need some lime please

Please, put your A/N at the end of a chapter. You got almost 2K reviews and no one bothered to tell you this? Especially your incorrect use of "disbelieve"? "Looked in DISBELIEF".

I almost stopped reading because you kept writing "(insert name) looked in disbelieve". Couldn't you think of some alternative so it wouldn't be so repetitive? And it's "disbelief". I'm sorry if I sound rude but it's really annoying. This story is interesting, tho.

This is good and all but you kept writing "disbelieve" when you meant "disbelief". I'm sorry!

Why did you put A/N on the Dance Dance Revolution part? It's already a given that you don't own that game, so saying you don't own it is absolutely unnecessary. But if you fee like there's something you have to explain, use an asterisk after it then explain it at the end of a chapter. That way, your writing will look neat and clean.

I notice a lot of native English speakers interchange "you're" and "your" and write "should of" instead of "should have". I wonder why since they don't sound the same. English isn't my first language so I always wonder why.

I feel old I remember having a MySpace I sadly forgot my password :’( and the story was really good I’m sad it’s over :(

I sounded rude in my last comment you can delete it

I surly hope this story isn’t like the show called “the fosters” where the foster child falls in love with their “sister” because that’s just gross and wrong but I’m going to continue reading because I already like this story

Wonderful story! Really great plot and I enjoyed it a lot

Well she did remember... in the end lol

She's gonna kill him lol

Oh gosh...

Loved it!

I hate the way you portrayed Kagome's mom, she's nothing like that. I utterly lost it when you introduced Koga, I have no interest in finishing this story and I'm angry that I wasted my time