Reviews for Unfocused
Guest chapter 1 . 5/29/2018
5 out of 5 stars. :D!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/9/2012
I like it. Well written, with a good plot, although I'm not so sure about Remus' reasons for being out of sorts in the morning. Maybe something else as well? Fatigue, perhaps? I don't know. Overall though, I liked it.
Flinch
Padfoot chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
Wonderful story. I really so ADORE your Sirius / Remus stories. Any chance you'll write more? Have you read any other stories similar to yours? I love these stories!
InsanitysGenius chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
LOVED IT! D
MillieIsabella chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
Cute one shot. Very well written, puppies are so cute together lol.
MadideLlama chapter 1 . 2/12/2009
Holy crap! Your doing the same thing I am! Though...I do like this name better than my other one. Parents can be so nosey sometimes. And if they're my parents, they also push their views quite heavily on you. Anywho, enough of the sob story, great fic! I love pretty much all of your stories. Keep at it!

-DaLlama
Umbrae Calamitas chapter 1 . 1/7/2009
((refuses to give back the fic)) OMG, it was WONDERFUL! Such drama! I was all worried that Remus really didn't love Sirius, and then he got all worried. And I love how James had some insight into the state that Sirius was in, thereby causing more drama. I just loved it! It was WONDERFUL! AMAZING! BRILLIANT!

The only thing I would comment on otherwise would be that you mentioned James finding Sirius when he was younger about three times, which might be overdoing it. It was important, I agree, and it added to the story, but you could just have James comment on recognizing how this is bad when they find Sirius, and then later when Sirius and Remus are talking, have the explanation that James talked to him for four hours.

I'm gonna go look at your other fics! Write more Sirius/Remus stuff! Lots of drama and happy endings!

~ Umbrae Calamitas

Live long. Live well. Write. Read. Dream.
Meep meep chapter 1 . 2/28/2008
i love it! so sad and wonderful :)
LDNatalie chapter 1 . 12/13/2007
LOVED this!
Shanster chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
Aww...

Wow. That was amazing! I loved it; it was fluffy and perfect and just.. aw... and it made me laugh at some parts, too. That 'Serious' joke is so overused I can't help but laugh every time I see it.

This is definitely going on my faves :]
BlazeorFade chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
This is my new favorite Serius/Remus fic. And its definately top ten for my favorite Sirius character study fic. Your Siri reminds me so much of myslef that its eerie. I am the same way. And the way Remus finds him and everything broke my heart for a minute.

Amazing job, honey. I love it.
runningfingers chapter 1 . 8/17/2007
Aww, this was so cute.
Ali-chan et Vani-chan chapter 1 . 8/14/2007
I loved this one too! RemusSiri are the best
greenmaiden chapter 1 . 8/9/2007
aw! That was really sweet! Remus- Sirius are my new obbsession too so I look forward to reading all your new ideas!
MoonyIsTheMan chapter 1 . 8/7/2007
I loved it!
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