Reviews for Scars |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Cute story, thanks for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not sure why, but this story doesn't seem to fit as well as the others I've read. |
![]() ![]() this was sooo sweet |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such a sad little chapter. :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() sweet |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so cute! I always wondered what Edward's reaction would be to all Bella's new scars after New Moon... Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even though it's a bit sad, I think that this fic is probably realistic about how Bella and Edward might be for a little while after they returned from Italy. It would probably take her a little while to trust that he was back forever and nothing she did would make her lose him. Meanwhile, he would probably still be wracked with guilt about causing her all that pain. So, I just wanted to say good job with this fic, and it was extremely well-written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw sweet ending I always KNEW Bella cut herself when edward was gone! LOL well anyways cute good story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww! He's so sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() id LOVE to know what happens next! Updates Soon (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMC that was so sad! Poor Edward. :( Sad, but really good though! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() what in hell? did he think she went emo or something for awhile... by the way, in one of the paragraphs, you have the sentence: He was not going to leave he loved me, he was not going to leave he loved me I chanted over and over again in my head willing myself to relax. you might want to do something to distinquish what is being thought by using quotation marks or a comma or something |
![]() ![]() Love it!Awesome!Write more! |
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