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make another chapter pleeeeeeeeaseee

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E xtraordinary chapters

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Hey... Are you dead? You posted this in 2007, updated it in 2010, and now it's 2020 and you haven't even made another chapter? (；0；) So sad... *Tear* I was really looking into this though... Soo... Can you please, *Sniff* make a-a *Tear* *Sniff* * Sniff* another chapter..?

P.S I am wrighting on my Kindle right now. I even READ this story on my kindle

Hey! I know this review comes ridiculously late, but this is a really cute, well thought-out fic? I love how some moments seem pretty deep and realistic-such as the discussion of a previous marriage, and the trials of eight stepkids-while some of it's utterly whimsical, very fitting for the franchise! Bowser's such a goof, but I can't help but side with him, and hope the marriage goes well.

More please

I know it's hard but could u post new chapters more often I am really into it. Pls post more frequently

comsidering th implied mama peach bit and kidnap multiple times to make little dragon turtles... well.

I was thinking about this, and I can see Peach telling Bowser that she'd be perfectly okay with him sleeping with someone else (aka, having a mistress) if he still had those "needs." And of course Bowser would blank-point refuse, claiming the sanctity of marriage and all that.

I really wish this would be updated, but it seems unlikely. That makes me so sad. This story had so much potential. Oh well.

I'm reading this in 2019 a few days from being 2020 I wish this story was finished it's so good

I read this fic years ago and I’m an official part the fan fiction community I had to give a review. Man I love this story so much. I like how portrayed the characters. They are so much deeper than even the Paper Mario versions. Bowser is especially good. It’s hard to write a beast that comes off as sympathic,but he is humor and kindness toward is great. I’m just sad I may never see the end of this story. I’m going to reread it for now.

Though then again its been 7 years since you last updated this since it was last updated in 2010. I dunno if you even see this or if your still on FanF OR still into Mario Bros. But I would really love if you continued with the story as it was getting goodif not give it to someone that can continued it. keep up the good work!~

please continued!

Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! Cliffhanger!
This was such an amazing story. I wish it was finished, but I was still really happy with what was written.

I'm doing this to see what will happen