Hello, Yep i'm Jacinta lol

This is awsome, really loved it, please make more :)

i should review so here's a review

i liikied it, its very original and well written

i shall favourite it

now i shall!

I really like how you portrayed Mihawk in this chapter. It really is true that he wouldn't be a warm-hearted type of guy very much, except that he probably does love his daughter.

And that's good for her, since she can such a nasty tempered one that nobody but Melia seems to love her!

Of course, she is funny. I love the scenes between her and Shanks.

Anyway, update soon!

SK

M...Ben...XD I just love the part where he puts out his cig

MIHAWK? Her father is MIHAWK? Wow, I wasn't expecting that. Update soon.

I don't know what to say. I liked the chapter, is that enough?

Hmm, Mihawk is Bara's daughter? Interesting... There aren't many fics that have him with a daughter. It's usually Shanks who has a child. But I like that! I can only imagine Mihawk punishing somebody who dared to hurt his daughter!

Update sooner, please?

SK

Like Bara, it would drive me insane if somebody said something, but didn't say any more about the matter.

So, is there a major plotline for this, or are you just writing whatever comes to mind?

Anyway, nice chapter. You've got me curious!

SK

Oh my gosh, I love this! I love how Bara seems to hate Shanks, and how Melia handled that creep.

And the background information was especially interesting.

Please post the next chapter first!

SK

Lol XD Bara totally hates Shanks! Can't wait to see how they'll get together! XD *POKES* :]

Loved it! Commenting the first chapter for all of them! I love the 4th one! :D You are doing a great job keeping everyone in character!

Well, this is different from the other Shanks fics I've read. MOst of them that are to do with relatives are just a daughter. I like the idea of a sister of Shanks.

This seems well written and intriguing and I want to read more, so update, please?

SK

OMG such a good story, I love it but you had alot more chappies, where are they, PLESE I NEED MORE :D it's so god

who! who!

E~! Please update again soon! -waits expectantly-

xD Still lovin' it.