Reviews for Smoking
Guest chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
great
Nautical.Empress chapter 1 . 12/28/2009
Someone could have seen them XD *hides camera and cleans nose bleed* Well at least you know that you need to develop your lemons _- it was still a good story and I liked it! Oh you written more, *clicks to go to your profile* keep writing!
Xx-MelRose-xX chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
kawii~~ omg i loved it i know im only 13 and shouldnt be reading this but i got to addicted...thanks
crazycracklady chapter 1 . 5/16/2008
Still, it was very fun-neh _ & kawaii! Excellent job :D
CrimsonxXxRabbit chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
THIS WAS A GREAT STORY. I COMPLETELY UNDERSTOOD ALL OF IT. JUST MAKE MORE OF THESE STORIES PLEASE T_T
XP chapter 1 . 3/27/2008
might I suggest that you replace 'hubby' with something else... namely...eh. i dunno. lover? yeah.. something else. 'hubby' kind of ruins the mood you set. I like the story, however! :D
I'll Be Your Lie chapter 1 . 9/10/2007
Wicked. loved it.
abraham lincoln chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
pretty much PWP, but who doesnt love that?

psh not me. great story.
Black-Rose23 chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
Maybe Naruto should throw out Sasuke's cigarettes more often.
three words i wish to hear chapter 1 . 7/25/2007
;_;

Wow.

That was...sudden. LOL!

Still good. (y)
Kanoi-chan chapter 1 . 7/24/2007
-licks lips- WAY yummy!
darkenedmirrors.softfocus chapter 1 . 7/24/2007
Lol, his wifey.

I loved it, keep up the good work.
Geminirose chapter 1 . 7/24/2007
Aw that was so cute but hot at the ending. I really love it!