Actually I have read your Brink of our Time before this... just that I didn't have chance to review that when I was reading it, unlike this story.

But yknow. I love both. You should be proud of this fic as well, there were parts that I had wished differently, but overall, I love this fic.

I think, for a story you didn't like as much, you still did good job with the ending.

One thing to ask though, the last part where it says:

Judging by the glow that burst from her body, Botan couldn't be happy. And neither could Hiei.

What does that mean? Didn't you mean "Botan couldn't be HAPPIER. And neither could Hiei."?

Cause if that's it, then I can peace out my mind that they were happy in the ending. But if that's not it, I would feel disturbed thinking they weren't happy. :(

Enlighten me please?
Maybe just send an email to me in my gmail account.

It is dollweapon, just add then gmail dot com. Yknow. Thank you very much. Good luck with your life!

What? After all this time, (well...I mean after all those months you updated this), you didn't like this story?

I'm shocked. :(

Good news...for me and you.

Because I also think this chapter is perfect! Their ahem yknow...the scene, is PERFECT!
It is probably safe to say that I was fangirling the whole time the scene was playing out.

Great job!

I loved this chapter.

Only one thing I had hoped that didn't happen... was Botan trying to give a wise word-fight with Mukuro.

Like how Botan could say that she would learn to love Hiei along the way.
Too bad she didn't... But well maybe it's understandable.

I still love the chap!

Hmm... I did not understand much what actually happened.

Maybe because I am not native in English. But then I felt that it's also because of too much vague details.

There are lots of details yes, but I can't come up with how they should be interpreted.

And I hate how Koenma does things in his own, ugh. One moment he marries botan off to hiei, now he is taking her back. So selfish!

Unless I interpreted wrongly. Yep.

I am beginning to get worried how this fic would have turned into proper romance... (seeing botan's reactions lol)

But I love it anyway.
Also I think you shouldn't encourage others to leave a flame. A flame is never helpful. It makes me think that you just want the number of reviews to increase.

If it were me, I would have preferred small number of reviews with people who either give me their honest thoughts and constructive criticisms, rather than many reviews with half being flames.

You know.

(I can't imagine someone wanting to hear that their work is garbage, trash or stupid)

I did not find any innuendo... I do not even know what that points to? :0

Sexual innuendos? Or different innuendos? Not sure.

Anyway I am hoping this story will have happy ending. Just crossing my fingers, since it is already completed!

And I didn't read other reviews to avoid spoilers.

Okay... well, I really like the idea and the plot! Sounds promising, and so I'll continue to read. Will probably drop reviews every now and then.

There is just few things I am quite uncomfortable to see. And those are the Japanese words scattered all over the fic. I speak Japanese so I understand them, but the thing is... you got some of them wrong.

Nigen Should be "ningen". With n. As it means human, and you got "ningenkai" correct (meaning human world)...which I wonder why you used nigen, could it be a typo...? :0

Rekai Should be "Reikai". With i. Meaning spirit world. "Rei" spirit, "kai" world. Same as "ningenkai" with "ningen" human, "kai" world.

Rekai tentei okay... like above, rekai should be reikai. Then "tentei" should be "tantei" which is "detective"

Most Japanese words are sensitive, especially if it's a real word with meanings, not just expressions. You forget one letter(part of syllable in Japan) or mistake one letter(part of syllable in Japan), and the word will be deemed either "non-existent" OR "a word with a completely different meaning"

So far, those are the ones I found... unless I miss some more.

I know this story is already completed, but just in case that you will write more stories, yu yu hakusho or not, I thought it would help.

Your writing style is great and gets me to see the scenes playing in my mind, so that's fantastic!

Just maybe next time when you decide to write and include Japanese words, search for a reliable source first or you could always ask a Japanese friend(if you have). : )

Ps. I do not mean any offense! I honestly hope you won't take it as one... : ( but I tell you, your writing is awesome, I love it!

I really liked this the more I read. Towards the end your writing improved greatly! I could visualize things better and seemed more probable. Good job. Sorry you didn't like what this story came to but I think many of us really enjoyed it!

This. Was. Perfection.
I'm still reeling from how perfect the characterization was and the fact that you managed to dramatize it all without becoming saccharine or overly romantic. Damn. Good work!

You should make some more of hiei and botan and their baby them finding out what the baby is a boy or s girl.

Hey it was good so don't beat yourself up

I think this story would have been fantastic if it wasn't so depressing.

This was so awesome. Hiei has always been one of my fav character. Keep up the good work , u r a great writer _

Kawaiii
Its perfect!