Your storie was just amazing I really love it

Lovely story! I enjoyed reading it. :)

Oh man i was hoping for moreeeee!

Very well written. I enjoyed it a lot !

oh

my

gosh.

I love this oneshot! 3333333333
Man, do I wish there was more! Just EEEEEEEEEEE! I LOVE THE SETTING TOO! MY GOSH, HEAR ME OUT WHEN I SAY THIS IS A VERY VERY VERY AMAZING ONE SHOT, M'DEAR! 33333333333333333333

This is a wonderful AU. Plus, Shikamaru's message was absolutely perfect. :) Great job on writing this!

I admire Shikamaru & Temari as a couple. Lovely story! :)

This is so cute in a non-fluff way. LOL XD
Imma read the rest of the NY Society series. :)
much love from renzie17 x

That was a good casting, I can really imagine Temari as an actress but I wish Konkuro was a master pupet crafts man.

That was absolutely beautiful, honestly, I loved it.

I like the subtle easing in that you brought with Shikamaru going to the theatre and adding in that he hadn't willingly accepted but more so out of obligation; it really showed itself in the ending of this one-shot, especially with the little bouquet of white roses.

I have to say, I don't think I'd ever believe Shikamaru to be left speechless or fumble with his words, it was a very nice way to make him seem so much different when faced with Temari Sands.

I spotted a few typos in the first few paragraphs, though they're generally minor, just thought I'd let you know.

Anyways, it was very amazingly written with all the good praise in-between.

...And this is a SERIES?

Excuse me while I fangirl in a corner...

(When did "fangirl" become a verb, anyway?)

Also, in case this wasn't evident:

AWESOME. STORY.

Seriously, very nice. I would say that "it doesn't happen that fast", but then, they've only gone on two dates, right? (well, implied-second, but whatever.) It's not as if they've "FALLEN IN LOVE OVER ONE DATE AND WILL BE 2GETHER 4EVAH! SQUEEEEE!" or any of that nonsense. I really enjoy the practicality and reality of the fic—and the short length really works for it, too! This is excellent stuff here. :)

Loved the ending!

Awww~ I LOVE it~!_ Care to make a sequel? To bad I can only review once~ T_T xD

Very nice. I like the low-key feel of this. It feels more realistic than crazy meetings and all that jazz.

And, as I resident of NYC for my entire twenty years of life, I think you handled the aspects of the city that you used in your story very well. The thing I love about NYC is that it is so versatile. Everywhere you go, there is something different, with all sorts of different people. THis is probably why anime characters seem to fit into the city so well. But still, you handled it beautifully. Great work.

Hee! Hee! So sweet!