| Reviews for Gone |
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  afrah chapter 1 . 4/14/2019 its the best story. you are really nice really amazing and cool ya .am big fan dear night owl |
 tiffywiffyfluffykitty chapter 1 . 4/22/2014 delightfully hilarious. nice job on this one |
| wren540 chapter 1 . 2/23/2014 AWWWWWWWWWWWWW SO MUCH FEELS! |
| Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 1 . 12/10/2012 I think that was an awesome first fic and an awesome fic in general! |
| De1eted Acc0unt chapter 1 . 2/5/2012 Yes, maybe this was your first fic. But it wasn't really as bad as you made it out to be! A few run on sentences and capitalisation errors, but it wasn't that bad. It was actually a very creative idea! |
| FlubberyFlobberworms chapter 1 . 12/22/2011 kasjdhfkljshdflkjsdghflkjga another cute one 8D really liked this one though! the clashing thoughts and the embarrassing admission~ hehehehehe so cute~~~ |
| noideagirl chapter 1 . 12/9/2011 "Can you do anything right Potter?" Perfect. Utterly perfect. Lovely story ) |
| wildwriterrr chapter 1 . 3/20/2010 i love your writings. |
| Pyromaniac-Girl chapter 1 . 7/3/2009 That was a good story. The ending was funny and I have to wonder if James thinks it is all some sort of strange dream because Lily was saying things that, while they made sense to her and the readers, could have confused him. I enjoyed reading this story and liked the way that you wrote the conflicting thoughts Lily had about James. I hope that you will have a good day! |
| reviewer-only chapter 1 . 6/18/2009 I like it...I really like it...:) |
| KlainePotter chapter 1 . 8/19/2008 very cute! |
| AllIWannaDo chapter 1 . 8/29/2007 hehe i love this! my writing isn't nearly so good at 4 AM, though for some reason i always have the urge to write late at night, too. hmm...anyway...back to the awesomeness of this fic. i can totally see that scenario taking place. ::nods:: definitely. i love james' cluelessness about lily's feelings, and his gloating once he finds out what she really means by "gone" (typical guy). i love lily's confusion, and her inner monologue at the beginning - how she is clearly in love with him, but hates him for making her fall in love with him, for making her depend on him, hates herself for feeling that way, for not admitting it, etc. she really does have rather complicated emotions where james is concerned, and i think you captured that well. it's my favorite fic of this type so far ). and the bit of fluff at the end was well-deserved. i can just picture the look on james' face. hehe. keep up the good work! lots of love! |
| Zbr chapter 1 . 8/13/2007 Aw, so cute! I LOVE JAMES! Haha, very nice, I adored it :) QE |
| Weird Not Boring chapter 1 . 8/13/2007 Wow, for your first fic this is fantastic. I really loved the ending - the dialogue was great. Good job! |
| thestralwhisperer chapter 1 . 8/9/2007 great fic |
