Reviews for Complexity
go away i'm dormant chapter 11 . 10/15/2010
I love Snape in this story. And all the kids are so cuute. (:
xPhoenix0Returnx chapter 14 . 7/7/2010
I love how you wrote Albus Severus. He's adorable and very lovable. And I'm very glad that Snape is softening for him. His running for Slughorn to save Al was very him and just very in character. I do wonder who poisoned Al though-I want to guess, is it the DADA teacher? I keep forgetting her name. Rosewater, Rosewater, Rosewater...

By the way, Dittany is really growing on me. Herself and her name. Oh! The piano part-that was extraordinary. I bet Mrs. Weasley would have cried from happiness. XD I also really like that everyone is fond or likes Snape more now. And his reactions are always very amusing.

Anyway, before I get too carried away and rant your ears off, I do love your story and look forward to the next part in the series. I like how you write with every chapter in little vignettes but yes, the chronological-ness idea sounds wonderful.
Lalaith Yamainu chapter 14 . 3/18/2010
I'd love for this story to be finished... has it been too long?
reader1writer1 chapter 14 . 1/21/2010
This is great. i'd love more of it. :) Great characterizations, all the way around.
Eques Pirate chapter 14 . 11/4/2009
ah, why is the last chapter not posted! from like 2 years ago! lol; cool story; i really like the format of it. nothing outside of the office! i will definitly look at the others!
you.lift.me.higher chapter 14 . 7/31/2009
Good job! UPDATE PLEASE :D
you.lift.me.higher chapter 13 . 7/30/2009
I felt like you deserved a review for this AMAZING chapter but had nothing to say! :)
you.lift.me.higher chapter 12 . 7/30/2009
:)
you.lift.me.higher chapter 11 . 7/30/2009
You seem like you unerstand all the characters so well. Great work...I REALLY don't know where you get all of these greast ideas!
you.lift.me.higher chapter 10 . 7/30/2009
YAY! Harry was back in this chapter! Haha, and that newspaper article was amusing. :)
you.lift.me.higher chapter 9 . 7/30/2009
YAY! I forgot about Kreacher, good idea to put him in the story :)
you.lift.me.higher chapter 8 . 7/30/2009
Rosewater seems like a new Snape! Haha, good chapter though. There discussions were soo funny. I was laughing most of the way through!
you.lift.me.higher chapter 7 . 7/30/2009
Haha, Rita Skeeter is back :P
you.lift.me.higher chapter 6 . 7/30/2009
I think you did a really good job with Snape's character...you can tell that he cares for the Potters deep down although he keeps his personality and is not completely soft like some people make him. Good work!
you.lift.me.higher chapter 5 . 7/30/2009
Lily's so cute! And I like the inter-house unity. :)
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