This is a piece of crap do to much Canon and over used couple.

Ok so I like the pretense of this story but so far there are a lot of typos and grammar mistakes I was wondering if you'll fix these eventually?

I want Ino !

I LOVE YOURE VERSION OF NARUTO KEEP GOING

that was good keep the chapters coming

that was good keep the chapters coming

that was good keep the chapters coming

that was good keep the chapters coming

I'm sorry, but I have to ask. Why the hell do you write he, Tenten, her, read, and remember like "HE, TEnten, HEr, REad, and REmember"?

It's annoying as hell and really pisses me off. I can understand holding shift for too long, but it only ever happens when the second letter of the word is E. did you lose a bet? That's the only explination I can think of that makes an lick of sense.

Isn't Kushina Naruto's mother?

Um, question, how the hell could Onoki be dumb enough to let himself get caught be Orochimaru especially with his Tertiary Element of Dust Release?

So you really killed your OC? Bit of a bummer but maybe if Sasuke'd allowed it, Reid could have taken Itachi's soul and given it to the Shinigami in exchange for Kenshin's.

Mugiwara Yuuki is Straw Hat Luffy, and why is Sasuke seriously acting like Zoro even down to his ability to got lost for too damned easily? And assuming Naruto is supposed to be Luffy, should Naruto be the same way when it comes to getting lost?

While I also hate the Uchiha I mean the fucktard abandoned his village, while in the beginning he said that he wanted to restore his clans honor and turns around and abandons the village I hated him for that tbh. So when I get off my ass and go back to my Naruto story I'm gonna have a nice little twist or two in it. First is Pedomaru's (Pedophile Orochimaru) curse seal, an OC's gonna intercept the attack by substituting himself with Sasuke in an attempt to save him despite their hatred with any Uchiha other than his three friends, Itachi, and Mikoto. However the first twist comes in the form of Sasuko. When Naruto wakes up he's like, "Uh Sakura-chan where's Sasuke?" Her reply he should be in there with you." "I only see a Raven haired beauty. WTH? Sasuke is a Sasuko, wth is going on her?!" In otherwords Sasuke's really a girl who had a sealing array that acted like a physical henge on her. Kinda makes sense why she never like the fan girls no?

You do realize you super shot this story right? Naruto was supposed to have started to learn and create his Futon: Rasenshuriken by his encounter with the zombie brothers but he hasn't yet.