That was TOTALLY how it should have gone!

Very nice! Yummy! Thanks so much for sharing!

More?

:) keep it coming!

very nice.

So a good start. Three suggestions: the word masturbation is proper and technical and not romantic. Use a different term next time. 2. When it comes to the kissing or any romantic touch, slow it way down by using more descriptive words and breaking down each step. 3. Nuke is so totally hot. Have you checked out LukeVanFan over on youtube? She/he's edited out only the Luke and Noah sections of the last fifty or so episodes. Nuke concentrated. Awesome!

Keep it up. This was a fun read.

This should have happend if maddi dident come in

Oh! I didn't know you wrote this. :D I love it! :D

Beautiful, and very in-character for both of them. I wish something like this had really happened during that episode, but the extra wait time made it all really worthwhile.

that was awesome! You should write more!

:sigh: I really wished this was what had happened. LOL. Nicely written, with some realistic little touches of Noah's reluctance and fear, without really making it into the central topic.

thanks for writing

paintedblindly

Short but cute I love luke and Noah! Will Noah finally accept his feelings!

Thank you for writing such a cute story. I've only recently caught up on the Luke/Noah storyline, and it is one that I respect and love. This story is what I wish would have happened in that episode. Oh well, the kiss they acutally did share was very sweet.

You rock my socks.

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This was great!

Lots of luv-Bone