| Reviews for Abandoning Humanity |
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  Guest chapter 25 . 7/29/2017 Twenty three is so oc. Like she keeps changing her emotions like a switch. |
 CCGhastly chapter 25 . 8/9/2015 Tawnty for a name |
| orgasmicgratz chapter 9 . 1/3/2010 *tilts head* a lot happened in that chapter... almost too fast for me, ya know? Judging by your a/n it was a long time between updates, and I know when I do that my mind is jumping ahead to future scenarios, making that kind of thing (smexy time for example) seem more acceptable... when in the story she's only been with them a few days. Would Megatron really allow his daughter to run off with Frenzy? Would he have any reason to think the dirty business wouldn't happen? She's innocent, after all, and wouldn't have a clue what they were doing might be bit much... I don't really know if I buy Megatron just letting them whisk her away like that either... maybe on consideration, with some planning and instruction... but as protective as he's been, I don't see his desire to get one up on the bots winning quite that easily (though no doubt it would win eventually.) My only advice for this chap in particular is maybe space it out a little bit, have Mikaela try to win them over and get to run home *before* 23 and Frenzy get approval, maybe even a couple of weeks. You wouldn't have to describe it in huge detail unless you just want to, just a blurb on... learning crap, or something XD |
| Emi Takahashi chapter 25 . 9/7/2009 cool |
| SleepiPanda chapter 25 . 7/21/2009 I hope the femme gets a friend...O,O Ooh! Ooh! I'll be her friend! |
| randomchick1995 chapter 7 . 6/30/2009 I love this so far! |
| ArmoredSoul chapter 25 . 6/19/2009 I'd stick with something that allows 23 to keep the "Tee" nickname. The website "Behind the Name" is a great sight for looking up names for all sorts of things, and it's easy to find when you search in Google. I'd give you the link, but you know how is about html. Can't wait to see what happens next! |
| ArmoredSoul chapter 24 . 6/18/2009 Soundwave happy makes me happy. Well, more than happy. More like ECSTATIC. |
| ArmoredSoul chapter 21 . 6/18/2009 YES! I love 23's no shiznit personality. Freaking BRILLIANT! |
| ArmoredSoul chapter 20 . 6/18/2009 Pft! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! HAHA! HAHAHAHA! OMG, I can't breathe! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! |
| ArmoredSoul chapter 19 . 6/18/2009 Matchmaker 23, eh? Oh dear... |
| ArmoredSoul chapter 15 . 6/18/2009 Tearing into one's own mind... *shudder* Scary. |
| ArmoredSoul chapter 14 . 6/18/2009 WOW. The AllSpark is one HELL of a psycho bitch, Jeebus! |
| ArmoredSoul chapter 13 . 6/18/2009 DAIN BRAMAGE! Pain, owwie, owwie, owwie, OW! Not making sense! AUGH! |
| ArmoredSoul chapter 11 . 6/18/2009 O.O WELL. To say I was surprised would be the understatement of the century. |
