Reviews for Mommy Seras and Daddy Alucard
Guest chapter 1 . 1/1/2019
CONTINUE!
lorena.martincorrea chapter 11 . 6/29/2018
ajajajaajajajajajjaaj a funny chapter.
Gamergirl0913 chapter 29 . 8/29/2017
It's been five years since the last update so I'm not expecting the author to come back...which is sad since I really like this story although it took a whole 180 turn from its original concept that I have seen in the early parts of the story. It became rapunzel real quick lol but I still love it and seeing the character growth. I really hope the author have the heart to finish if you ever come back to this story to read this review
Guest chapter 29 . 7/4/2017
Please update this soon. I want to find out what happens next.
darkmessiah17 chapter 29 . 1/6/2017
Not trying to sound like a asshole but where in the Heck are you
darkmessiah17 chapter 29 . 1/6/2017
I just can't believe you killed Priscilla I'm wondering how Nick will handle that they would've have been a great couple if only you could finish this PLEASE
Vampire Priest chapter 1 . 8/22/2016
may I have permission to read this on my youtube channel? it will be drawn compleatly with chibis and I'll correct any gramatical errors I see so as to not make you look like a fool on the internet
Halloween Spirit chapter 6 . 6/1/2016
Anything to get the kid to shut up. he says but I don't think so. Really great story so far 7/10
darkmessiah17 chapter 1 . 3/21/2016
Please Finish this Story I love it well the only the part I don't like is that you killed off Priscilla
Rachael.C727 chapter 29 . 1/31/2016
I do applaud the way you made an interesting story involving original characters that can easily be seen in the Hellsing universe. However, I do have qualms regarding the pace of the story and character development. Initially, I was excited to see a story about Seras and Alucard adopting and raising a baby because it's a difficult job for humans let alone creatures of the night. So the idea of Seras and Alucard taking turns to feed or change a child has a lot of potential humor and character development that I think were missed. Alucard could've reminisce about when he was a father a long time ago and the bond between himself and Seras could have strengthened and change more romantically. By the time Nicholas is 17 years old I'd like to think that they had a much better understanding of one another because, after all, it's been 17 years. On that note, 17 years, and Integra and Walter haven't seem to age, at least it isn't written like they have. So while the Enemy vampire clan has been waiting to find and eliminate the child, no real research was done on his whereabouts. They knew of Hellsing and of Alucard being in the area but didn't seem to cross paths until Nicholas is in high school and Alucard/Seras have to go to the parent/ teacher meet and greet. And at the meeting (which had tons of potential hilarity that's Addams Family worthy) I felt like Seras was cast aside as an interesting character in her own right. Sure she can have a jealous streak, I have no problem with that at all, but she was just warned about the pretty teacher seducing "her man" and made it rubbed in her face that there was nothing between them. By all accounts Seras is beautiful in her own right and I would've liked to see Alucard get a taste of his own medicine. Or have have the women poked and prod at her "secrets" for looking so young. I don't know about you but if a see a woman who looks no older than 25 with a 17 year old son I'm going to ask questions. This would have been easier to get away with if he'd been in kindergarten and Seras is a acting/ fussing like the young proud momma I know she would be and is depicted in your story.
I only say these things because I really like the ideas that you put forth in the fic. And even though you hadn't updated since 2012, I think that if you would come back come back and re-read your fic you could see what I mean and probably fit all of these ideas in a series rather than one fic. I hope to see something from you soon!
Nidias dragonoid chapter 21 . 7/19/2015
Not going to lie Alex and alucard are hilarious
Guest chapter 1 . 2/13/2015
well that story was good I guess but alucard is not married with sera. that's all im gonna say
The fairytale lover2002 chapter 8 . 12/8/2014
I love ur fanfic!
A11YouN33d chapter 1 . 10/29/2014
This is something new, I loved the plot and the idea of them being parents to a human.
Zach Giustinian chapter 29 . 5/31/2014
Absolutely INCREDIBLE! Nice twist! Can't wait for next bloodbath (getting a wolfish, menacing grin like Alucard's)
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