great story

sooooo yummy! I adore this! I just wish you added more chapters! this sex could go on forever! and where did the pervy sage go? So many details left unansewered meow! XD

O.O Best plan for the future ever.

ZOMG I LUV NARU/JIRA FANFIC NOW YAY 4 GAY PEOPLE THEY do HAVE THE MOST fun( giggles perversely) YAY HOT SMEXY SMEX U RULZ! (OH! look up bleach and ichigo and kisuke thats always HOT(ichigo kurosaki and kisuke urahara)YAYZ!

YOu should have made Naruto a girl it would be more Realistice

But i KInda thought it was funny.

OMFG THIS WAS SO CUTE! I love JiraNaru *huggles Jirayia* this was so awesomely adorable! :D

That was awesome!and everyone is at least a little

interesting, and sad for Naruto that really bites, so only a few people stuck w/him...SO SAD...but man oh man, Jiraiya as a consolation prize...NICE...sorry I LOVE Jiraiya...

THANKS:"D

I like this pairing and you did a wonderful job writing this. I wish this would be a pairing in the anime/manga, but sadly it won't happen. At least I can still read this pairing in Fanfiction. :) Keep up the good work.

i loved it are u going 2 write more?

wow. thats strange i'm planning on having a sex change when i get older and have the money to do it ad i'm also a perv too! yay -hugs ya- i can't believe it

You should totally add another chapter that involues Jiraya or Naruto getting all jealous over one another that would be so cool, o by the way i like chapter one, the endin was cute and funny.

zomg i should've been born a guy ._. im perverted like YOUU and Jiraiya-sannin. zomg :) you rule.

Kenthos: *nose bleeds* well, any chance of a sequel to this one? Great job, you should write JiraiNaru fics more often.

Minato: *sighs* you are such a pervert

Kenthos: yeah, but I'm your pervert.

Minato: that's true. Anyway, awesome fic.

try it with naru as a girl and you might get even more people to read. and by that i mean new title something like (Unseen by the Untrained Eye: revamped for others.) or something. all it'd take is a new title and change all the things like he,him,and his to she,her,and hers.