I followed this story the first time around, and it's one of my favorites. I'm sad you took it down to update it, but never finished. I would love to be able to read it again!

Can u please continue the story? I really like it

I absolutely love it! Please update again soon!(:

More please!

Pease update soon!

Just a little Brit-picking for you on this chapter - when you keep mentioning Lucius sitting on a 'duvet', that's actually a bedspread/comforter. I think you mean 'divan', which is a type of couch (or a sort of mattress). Otherwise, good work!

Merci pour ce nouveau chapitre !
J'adore votre fic et je vous souhaite une excellente continuation !
Merci pour le partage !

I love the Lucius/Hermione scenes, but Snape/Ron Weasley is cringe worthy as a pairing. If you killed off Ron I wouldn't be remotely sad. Please don't move the plot forward too much in the Ron/Snape chapters because I don't plan to read those.

Yeah, I tried to persevere with this but it's ridiculous how little the whole rape/torture thing seems to have affected her...but losing Lucius? Oh noes! If you're going to write rape/abuse, please handle it properly, it should never just be a plot device, I.e. 'something bad has to happen to the heroine, let's chuck in a rape scene!'

Awww, a rape fic! How romantic!

Nononooooo! You can't just leave it there! I am expecting Ginny to birth some kind of monster, and I was so excited (I know, I'm just evil) to find out what it was!
Okay, now that that's out of the way, I shall not be one of those reviewers who demand updates. I actually clicked on this story because honest to god, I've never read an ss/rw pairing before, and I've always liked hermione with the more unconventional characters. Ignore those who keep harping on about OOCness. This is fanfiction, technically you should be able to do what you like.
Anyway, thank you for having carried on this far. All the best!

so crushed that you had unfortunately abandoned this fanfic….

Your portrayal of the characters were very OOC Uhm I couldn't recognize it anymore. Seriously though I was not happy with Hermione losing her virginity with those death eaters and work tail? Yucks atleast if it was lucius I can say it would be understandable since in the end they'll end up with each other or something but really. Uhm I can't continue with your story im really very very queasy with mentions of rape even if it's not detailed the mere fact that you mentioned her being used by other people I couldn't get the image out of my mind and I literally vomitted after reading it.. It just triggered something in me so sorry

I really, really enjoyed the first few chapters of this fic. It was perfectly dark, enthralling, and had me glued to your words. However, as it went on, some of the choices you made began to deeply bother me, particularly Hermione's characterization and the apparent glamorization of a romance with a skewed power dynamic.

While it's realistic and understandable for Hermione to fall for her savior, and for Lucius to fall for the beautiful young girl at his protection, it's troubling that you've seemed to write this as a pairing of true love. The couple is rather sick; which is ok to write about if in the end Hermione leaves him behind, not marries him and lives happily ever after with her ex master. It's also rather anti-feminist that Hermione is so caught up in Lucius that she can think of nothing but him, even though her first priority in life has always been attempting to overthrow Voldemort and restore peace. But in this, instead of thinking of restoring equality in an unjust world, or even vengeance against her oppressors, all she thinks about is how gaga she is for Lucius and weddings and babies. It's extremely OOC and I didn't understand it.
ALSO. She had disparaging thoughts about house elves? This is the girl that founded S.P.E.W. as a teenager, she would never think of them as her "equal, at worst." Now, if all the time she spent being tortured as a slave fucked her up so much that she suddenly stopped caring about disenfranchized groups of the wizarding world, then maybe explain how and why. Otherwise it feels like a misunderstanding of her character. I'm sorry if I offended with this, I do think you're a wonderful writer and one of the better ones on this site. It just bothered me morally as I continued to read this story.

Keep yup the good work