it was so great!

in the beginning yuki wasen't himself basically he was like kyo trying to be nice i can't read it but i want to cause yuki is my fav. character cause yuki and kyo basically the to enemy that are nothing alike like hatori is completely different than shigure

i was kinda worried by how long the story is, but now i don't regret the decision to read it.

ah-may-zing story!

gosh i love yuki and tohru! :)

Aww! I love this story!

omg i lovedd this so good! awesome job!

peace love praise and support!

babyC

luc the story!

Hmm, maybe I'll check it out, thanks for telling me

Things I liked:

Great characterisation on everyone

Yay! Tohru's an angel

I like the numerous ways in which you refer to Tohru

I really enjoyed the short lines mixed with the paragraphs

Cute Yukiru fluff XD and Kyoru fluff too!

Nice metaphors and imagery

I like the limitless favour thing

Why do I get the feeling that the end to this will be really sad?

I can really imagine the scene

Aww, now I want to hug Yuki-kun, or at least bandage his hand

I like that line: "I want to see Yuki in your eyes...not Akito"

Great cognitive exploration

The way you've written this helps me feel all emotions at the same time as Yuki does - the mark of a good writer

I'm surprised Tohru notices Yuki's lies

Aww! I'd be happy if Yuki gave me a real smile as well XD

Poor Machi-chan T_T

Aww, she knocked his shoes in, that's pretty cute

No! Toh-chan can't be bleeding!

Aww the end was adorable! Great work

Ways to improve:

Try not to repeat words or phrases

I'd make Aya a little more flamboyant

I loved it!

~Myst

Things that I didn't like:

Why is she saying Yuki-san and not Yuki-kun? Why does she call him Sohma-san later on?

Awkward phrasing: "she eyes widened" "A gave a fake reassuring smile" "He gave her bored look" "always seems do be lying" "Instead of head towards the right, he went left" "who should saw"

I just love this story! So very well-written..This is going to my favorites!

cool! I'll check it out!

this was the best story ever ... it was a litel long but it was so awsome , i love yuki and i love Tohru and i more love tham as"lovers" lol XD never mind

I love this Yuki and Tohru pairing! I just started reading Fruits Basket and I fell in love with it. I don't have a problem with Kyo and Tohru, but for some reason I just like Yuki better. This is the firts Yuki and Tohru story I've read on fanfiction. Thanks for making it a great story!

:)

ok... im only half way through the chapter and your writing is already getting on my nerves. DO NOT KEEP REAPEATING NAMES! Use "you, they, I" when you keep repeating names its bad grammer, and EXTREMELY anoyying... ok... back to reading...

P.S. the story is really good so far...

Okay people, let's swoon together now...AW! I loved that! It was so cute!

That was so good! i love fruits baskets and you made it even better!