Reviews for Fallen leaf
Guest chapter 10 . 3/30/2019
This is just really awesome and interesting I can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue
Mika the Raven chapter 10 . 8/16/2018
plz continue this
1Billy-234 chapter 10 . 3/27/2016
i like youor story are you going to add to it?
Guest chapter 10 . 10/28/2015
Ya gotta update

Go back to Nerima see what NWC is up to
Ranma gains some of Kyu's power
Gets a team
Maybe rescue/adopts a kid
Time skip a few months or years
The NWC come after Ranma
Ranmaleopard chapter 10 . 2/8/2015
This is just god damned awesome I know that the author has probably left the site seeing as this fix hasn't been updated in years but I hope he/she comes back soon and finishes this. I always find the time to read and reread this and without question always enjoy it. Please continue and update!
arcanasage chapter 10 . 1/22/2014
I have really enjoyed reading this story, I wish that you will come back and continue this story.
A Rabid Fan chapter 7 . 6/10/2013
Just a question but did Ranma pick up his weapons when he left the training ground with Anko?
shugokage chapter 10 . 2/28/2013
This is an incredible well thought out story and I am sad to see it incomplete!
Byakugan789 chapter 10 . 6/28/2012
i'm the guest who posted last, sorry about the anon, computer troubles.
Guest chapter 10 . 6/28/2012
Bloody fuck, man. This was a page turner. nuf said.

Naruto better get a decent wrap this time though, you've taken away the primary source of what fucked him up and the poor kid deserves it.
kajoshin chapter 10 . 3/29/2012
Love this fic!

That omake was roflmao!

keep up the awesome job!
FaerieKnight197 chapter 10 . 11/6/2011
While once again I enjoy your writing I have a few complaints. This seems a bit too much of a Overpowered Ranma story. To fix this, I could suggest a few limits. For one, why let Ranma even develop a permanent chakra pool? And exactly what is the conversion ratio for creating it? Perhaps due to overuse his ability to create chakra gets damaged? Or maybe as a sort of limiter, his body starts imposing a hefty conversion cost. Say a ten to one (or worse) ratio. Thus if he has 500 ergs of chi (ki) and 100 ergs of shin, he could only convert 10 ergs of chakra.

Alternatively, perhaps his generation of ki and shin gets damaged due to burnout. Thus meaning while he has large reservoirs, it might take weeks to recover from any serious reckless expenditure. A good way to think of this is in D&D 2nd Edition and how it treated mages. In that RPG system a mage could unload devastating firepower within just a half hour, completely tapping out of magic. But they they were literally spending weeks recovering from that brief fight.

Personally, I don't understand the "ranma is super powerful" mentality. Sure he's incredibly strong and durable. And yes he's skilled. But in canon how many opponents does he face who are well rounded martial artists? Most of them rely on one or two tricks at the expense of skill. And Ranma is no different. He tends to use the chestnuts technique, the dragon ascension wave, and his energy blast far more then anything else. That, and he tends to favor jump kicks a lot.

Still, good story and I hope you continue it.
Ranmaleopard chapter 1 . 11/2/2011
I can't say anything it's that extremely good! I can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue!
Lerris chapter 9 . 10/28/2011
It has been awhile since I read this, yet it remains a good story. The biggest two problems are that Ranma probably learns too fast, to keep things reasonable, and that you gave him Kage Bunshins to bring that to a ridiculous level. When you combine that with the apparent fact that the Kyuubi could be released, then his potential impact is insane. My recommendation, should you choose to continue this is to go back an weaken Ranma by making it near impossible for him to ever mold both parts of Chakra, then have him actually struggle a bit in his new life, particularly with Genjutsu. Along the same lines you might want to tone down Akatsuki to avoid the craziness of canon.
Kithrin chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
Any chance of this being continued?
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