"My sticks and stones, they break your bones

My words have always hurt you

I have always heard your anguished groans

And I'm sorry, because... I love you."

I loved that!

All in all it was beautifuul.

Cute poem, I liked it.

Fantastic, simply fantastic. You took a wonderful theme and applied it to a creative plot...well done. Thanks for the great read, I'm adding you to my favorites.

Cheers and happy writing!

Perfect.

Absolutley perfect. )

~Hazel~

That was such a cute story. Beautiful, sad...and the end is happy.

YAY.

*claps* that was beautiful!

i loved the poetry. so beautiful!

Very cute, Very sweet. I really liked it.

Oh, so fantastic. I loved the poems, and I usually don't (I mean, I like poetry okay, I just don't normally LOVE them) so that's a huge compliment. Lol. Um, it was so sweet and had some angsty bits and was all good. I'm just saying, if you write more, I will read.

This is very good. The poems are really well written. I loved JD's longest poems, it's fantastic. I think that you're probably right in the sense that maybe they wouldn't write poetry to one another, but I can buy JD doing it out of desperation to try and connect with Cox and Cox doing it back, at first to try and get the message across the JD, but then to also admit things he's not sure how to say. It's a good story.

And you should continue if you feel you have somewhere to take this, if you're just going to because people say they want more. Writing should always be for your own passion, not for pleasing others (at least that shouldn't be the main reason behind it).

I want to print this fic out and keep it just so I can reread it at random intervals and go "aghalggkhl" in my brain.

(That's a GOOD THING, by the way. I loved it)

-G

This is realy good. More please?

Brilliant!

I love it to bits...:D