Reviews for The Ugly Duckling!
Guest chapter 15 . 6/27/2017
THIS WAS SO CUTE! I loved when Ruka had Natsume take a picture of Ruka kissing Hotaru so he could blackmail her. That was just so cute. Tsubasa and Misaki as a couple. -fangirl squealing- they were always my favorite.
Good job on the story, I loved it!
-A very, very happy reader.~
OtakuFlame chapter 15 . 9/5/2015
Whoa. That was awesome. Refreshing too. I guess it was a bit OOC but in a good way. The story had a good vibe about it and the characters just made it better.
Great job *thumbs up* •
sande chapter 1 . 7/15/2015
wow!who ever you are that wrote the story..i just want to say that your story was so realistic and i enjoyed it alot! story well written! fantastic job you've done here :)
sukidaisuki chapter 15 . 4/17/2015
bravo! bravo! your story is soo great! gosh.. How i wish for more... :3.. Ne, onii-chAn could you please mention my codename in some of your wonderful stories.. Onegai!
sweet little chapter 15 . 3/27/2014
I love to read your story. & I dunno what should I say? A lovely end...! I like it. Soooo, even this is too late for review to your story, I comment you now. [even about more years have passed...] may be you won't see my reviews.
It is fine. I'll read your other stories too. Review them too.
sweet little chapter 4 . 3/26/2014
Woah! I'm really unable to find this story. I missed it but I didn't gave up. sooo I finally found it out. I forgot this story & Wuuuuuh! I'm really tired when I come to think about it. Anyway GOOOOOD LUCK...!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/8/2014
What are they doing? Aren't they only 4?
Polka-Dotted Strawberries chapter 15 . 11/24/2013
Most people don't know how to end a fan fiction (or a story, for that matter), but you surely do!
unknown chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
coooooooooooooooolllllllllll
goblinheart chapter 8 . 9/8/2013
Misume so cute
goblinheart chapter 2 . 9/8/2013
Wheeeeeeehhhh natsume meanie
Kyaaaaaa chapter 4 . 5/13/2013
OMG! You referred to KYO! I'm so amazed! Teehee! I love him and I think you are a great author!
robin chan 66 chapter 15 . 2/15/2013
kawaiii natsume
this was beautiful
A-DiDDy101 chapter 3 . 10/25/2012
The writing is very good but I believe you don't need to type in parenthesis how everyone looks as we can imagine from from description.
A-DiDDy101 chapter 2 . 10/25/2012
Those are some smart four year olds. Man I with I was that smart when I was four.
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