Reviews for Going Dark
mithrilandtj chapter 7 . 7/14
why not give the bitch something to miscarriage?
Bluewolf80 chapter 4 . 5/4
Why would Harry have sex with Ginny after knowing that she conspired to dose him with potions, rape him, then have his child just to steal his fortune? I mean there is pretending and then there is participating. Harry could have stopped at any time!
Guest chapter 37 . 4/30
Harry has jet black hair. Not brown. The fanfic was good though. Congrats
Sakura Snape-Malfoy chapter 33 . 1/24
I thought all of Harry's possessions were destroyed? How did the map survive? Could his invisibility cloak have survived as well? Seeing as it's one of the deathly Hallows. What about the horcruxes?

Sorry 'bout all the questions. It's been a while since I last read this story.
Sakura Snape-Malfoy chapter 31 . 1/24
Re-reading this story and it's just as great as the last time I read it.

I noticed that in this chapter you said that Severus could speak it but not read it. In Ch. 28 he could understand it but not read it. And, i want to think that earlier in the story you had put Severus had a potion by Salazar that would remove the dark marks. Sorry, I don't remember what chapter that was.

I really like this story and most of your other stories as well.
Kushka chapter 37 . 11/24/2019
Great story
Hotbutteredcorn chapter 24 . 5/30/2019
He's so passive with Severus. Ugh. Show some damn backbone!
Guest chapter 4 . 5/4/2019
DUDE! That bitch has been drugging and RAPING Harry! That deserves more than a how dare you cheat on me attitude! WTF?!
BaronHumbert chapter 37 . 2/25/2019
Nice story, out of curiosity are you thinking of doing a sequel? Would be fun to see the characters children come to Hogwarts with Snape as headmaster and the other three professors there as well. Maybe have some conflicts go on between Harry and his former best friends.
Nekoyasha12 chapter 37 . 10/16/2018
This was a great story and all... But what happened to Dean? Did he die in Azkaban? And since Ginny was innocent did Harry make her the potion (it was mentions but I don't remember which chapter) that is able to break any and al previously made magical promises and vows? It would enable her to be with Dean if he's released or even someone else if he's dead.
Just wondering. ;
Jewel Becky chapter 28 . 8/23/2018
Dumbledore's father wasn't a Muggleborn, his mother was with his father being possibly a Half-blood at least but the Azkaban part is true.
RandomlyLucky chapter 37 . 8/13/2018
Amazing story! just brilliant!
Gambito chapter 37 . 5/7/2018
I absolutely loved this fic! Thank you. You were able to balance the good, the bad and the in-between perfectly and I really love a happy ending. :D
Mephistopheles chapter 37 . 11/19/2017
Love, love, love, love iiiiiit.
I finished it and it was awesome.
Awesome was all I had. You see, apparently there aren't enough words in the dictionary for me to use.
They ran out.
Don't worry, I'm gonnat make one:
Stupenawsobrilliaamazbueatiffantastic
(Stupendous, awesome, brilliant, amazing, bueatiful and fantastic.)
Ps, snape was in character too.
Ugggggh, how did you keep and twist snape's character at the same moment.
Burning the dark mark on dimbles chest was a good idea. Take that dimbles. Karmas a bitch.
Mephistopheles chapter 10 . 11/16/2017
I'm on chapter 10 and I can only say 1 word. Okay, maybe 2. "BLOODY BRILLIANT". Seriously. Debs, you are a brilliant writer. Your stories are unique. Special. Most fanfics have the same plot. Harry overhears conversation between dimbles and his friends plotting against him, goes to gringotts, finds blocks on his magical core and love potions in his system, gets them removed, finds out he is very powerful and lord of many houses, buys lots of clothes, studys hard, trains to defeat voldy... Bla bla bla(this is the most used plot).
But you, nah, your like " hell no, I need something spicy for my stories". I've read countless fanfics ranging from manipulative dimbles, weasel bashing and snarry and I've tried to compare to see how they are different.
And... The results were... EVERYTHING.
You know, in the series, Severus was very powerful, and If he didn't turn to the light side, he would have been as powerful as voldy and dimbles. Many fanfic writers disregard that and make him a cold, bitter man dependant on voldy or dimbles, living a sad life before falling in love with harry or someone, and then living a happy life after his defeat. You, brought out that streak in him, one which existed and was begging to be brought out. Remember, while in the books, just because snape loved lily and protected harry, doesn't make him good. He deceived voldermort, a very rare achievement. He was a master in dark arts. Oh and let's not forget, he was a death eater.
Gonna continue reading, will review later.
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