Nooooo it's over

This is interesting

I am saddened to c that this story appears to be abandoned:(
It was very well done, kept readers intranced I’m sure! Since it certainly did me!

The anticipation is kill me. I really hope you update this amazing story.

Eh!
No updating ,i thought this is the last chapter ...

How wrong i am...

One of the best I ever read! Can't wait for the next one!

I don't like the plot twist with Sasuke being wealthy before all this started. It creates massive holes in your plot.

To start, Sasuke is whoring himself out to pay for Itachi's medical bills. Since he was originally rich, he'd have a lot of connections and wouldn't need to do that. The story is well aware of this fact because Jiraiya and Kyuubi offered to give him money. I'm sure there were plenty of other family friends of the Uchihas who also made the same offer. The story attempted to offer an excuse for this plot hole by claiming Sasuke was too proud/stubborn to take their money, but this is an incredibly weak excuse. Since Kyuubi and Jiraiya are rich, they wouldn't have missed the money they'd lend Sasuke. Further, their help wouldn't have been charity as Sasuke could have paid them back the second Itachi got better.

There was NO reason for Sasuke to be proud/stubborn in this case. He's defiling himself by having sex he hates for nothing. And if you make Sasuke too proud/stubborn to accept help, then why would he accept help from Naruto? Either he is a person who won't take ANY help from ANYONE, or he is not. The second Sasuke willingly accepts help from Naruto (as he did when he hoped Naruto would stop him from sleeping with Mr. Haruno), then it begs the question of why Sasuke wouldn't take other people's help. He let Naruto stop him from having sex he didn't want, but wouldn't let Kyuubi do it? And if he needs money so bad, then why is he okay with Naruto messing up one of his regulars and preventing him from earning his pay for the evening? All of these things are contradicting what the story has written: Sasuke needs money, yet he wants Naruto to stop him from having sex with Kabuto and Mr. Haruno. Sasuke is too proud/stubborn to accept help, yet he takes Naruto's help. More plot holes.

Finally, and most importantly, we've just arrived at Sasuke's large, palatial house that even has maids walking around. If Sasuke doesn't have the money for Itachi's medical bills, then where is he getting the money to pay for maids, for water and electricity bills for a giant house, and for the enormous property taxes for his mansion? What is the excuse for this? Perhaps all the fees for the house have been automatically set up to be taken from Itachi's trust fund? Yet if this were the case, then why was no provision ever made to pay for any medical care Itachi might need? He's the fucking heir is he not? (The clause that Sasuke can't have access to any of his family's money even in the case that something should happen to Itachi is completely ridiculous in itself.)

Even if there is some weak excuse for why Sasuke is able to maintain the mansion, then why isn't Sasuke selling off his belongings? If he fires the maids and sells all the artwork, cars, and god knows whatever else the Uchihas have, Sasuke would have MORE than enough to pay for Itachi's expenses, especially if he can sell (or rent out) his house! If 3,000 from Naruto is enough to pay Sasuke's bills for three months, imagine how much he'd get from selling off one of his family's Bugattis.

Sasuke had plenty, and I mean PLENTY of other options other than prostitution but didn't take any of them just because. Completely ridiculous.

I just don't understand why you couldn't make him be poor for real. None of these plot holes would exist if you had. What, did you think a poor Sasuke would be unappealing to your readers? Or do you think only a rich person could have the type of refined characteristics you've given Sasuke? Can't poor people be beautiful or graceful? Or is it that you just didn't want Naruto to be with a scummy lower-class person?

O man this story is great plllllzzzz update

Comeback please!?

Uh... I don't even know if I want to continue reading this. Sasuke loves Naruto but Kyuubi was his first... And they're brothers. That's fucked up. I don't think I want to read on to see if they even end up together and how.

Sasuke has too much baggage for Naruto to handle. Naruto's too naive and pathetic, in a way. Plus he gave into telling Sasuke his past so easily and yet doesn't know much about Sasuke himself. Naruto will only get hurt down line with all the secrecy.

I'd understand if you say "it's not his business," but they're going to become a couple later on. Idk how to word what I'm thinking and it'll probably come to me later on but yeah... Haha.

I guess I like the way you tie Sasuke in with other characters that relate to Naruto like with Kyuubi, Sakura and her dad even. But nah, I can't read on knowing Naruto's brother was with Sasuke sexually.

Yes Naruto! Good morning! You're the worst fucktard in the world xDDD

Gosh I hate Naruto.. His character irks me for some reason.

I hate the last line xDDD cos I simply loathe Sakura uurrggg

Please update!

Omfg I read this in one day nonstop i even skipped lunch and dinner! This is E.P.I.C. and soo being put on my favorites list and being followed for the remaining chappies. Naruto better have a good reason for leaving a scared Sasuke! Especially when he backed up and is being held like that! :O I cant wait for the update.