Love your stalking-Xelha! xD You said the first chapters need to be edited but honestly, they're perfect as they are - they really look like letters, not only asking for a reply but trying to tell something: Xelha's feelings for Kalas but also her love for her country, her present and past fears, her affection for her friends... On that note, I really loved chapter 6 with all the departures, it's so sweet and touching '] Gibari is, as always, my hero ;D

Finally, I think it's way too cool that you called every chapter with a word composing a sentence. I'm trying not to spoil it to me, it adds to the mystery of the story!

melodia does need therapy. even though i'm reading this two years later, this story was great, and i love how kinda made all of them 'pathetic and lovesick' in their own little ways. :)

I don't want to kill him so much anymore.

My happiness, she knows no bounds!

I want so badly to administer some major attack on that dumb head of his.

Gah! All of the sudden, I'm incredibly happy!~

Kalas... you moron.

(Still, I'm so, so happy that he's written back.)

I can sense something bad is about to happen, and my tender heart just can't take it...

It just... it just broke again. Why must you do this to me? It's so beautifu that I cannot stop, but it hurts me so.

Oh! Oh!

My heart just broke. No!

I can understand his selfishness, but... I just want to slap him.

Urgh, the indecision! If I were Kalas, I'd book the next flight over.

It's so pure and lovely. Kalas is a moron.

I did cry. Bitterly.