This was so good omfg good job

this is so sweet! I am so glad you added this last chapter to it, the twins are perfect

this was pretty good, though Naruto finished that train in like a month anyway so hopefully he'll be just a little while longer, ne?

I am so sorry I did not comment more and waited until I reached the end to do so, but I was really quite absorbed with the story and couldn't make myself stop reading long enough to review. Whenever I finished a chapter I quickly clicked the next button and continued reading.
This was beautiful and wonderfully written. I think there was hardly any instances where Naruto or Sasuke were too OC for me to handle and If there was, I either laughed at it or quirked a brow, but nothing was terrible or made me cringe. I think. I'm not too sure, since I don't remember everything.
Loved the sex scenes and how the two's emotions, thoughts, and actions were conveyed and kept close to character along with how their relationship started out and developed into more until it grew more than they thought and there was nothing they could do to change it. Not that they wanted to of course, but it did take time for everything to work out. Which was handled at a great pace and wasn't forced.
Remarkably, Sakura wasn't horrible in this, as she is wont to be or made to be, and I could understand her and not be too mad, hateful, or disappointed- as I am wont to be.
Kakashi's and Sai's reactions, or lack of, and their comments to Sasuke in the beginning about him and Naruto being together were amusing and gave me chuckles. So did Tsunade's bet with Jiraiya. XP haha
The children were a delight and the family they created was absolutely beautiful, warm, loving, and gorgeous to picture. It was fun and amazing to see how far they've come. I wish them endless happiness. They deserve it and more, but I believe they're happy enough already.
Thank you so so very much for writing and sharing this!
Geeze, for a first fanfic, it was more than remarkably well. Haha it's getting me sort of thinking again that maybe I should write my own stories, just like my cousin keeps telling me, except I enjoy and prefer reading too much to do so. But hmmmm, maybe I should try harder and give it a try.
Anyways, Take care and have fun!

Une belle fic sans grandes prises de tête, juste ce que j'aime.
Il est rare pour moi d'apprécier une fic où naruto et sasuke sont déjà en couple dès le départ car ils sont généralement à l'opposé de leur caractère alors qu'ici ils gardent leur vrai personnalité ce qui est remarcable du moins pour ma part!
en tout les cas j'ai passé un bon moment à lire cette fc et t'en remercie!

Woah, I found a piece of really special gem. Sure, there were little errors here and there occasionally, but I think that the depth of this story stands out more than anything. I love how you portrayed Naruto and Sasuke as opposites that fit each other despite their differences and how reality reared its ugly head. The issues were realistic and dealt with care and rational actions and words. I mean, the fact that you didn't bash Sakura already won points from me. I also thought that the fact that Sasuke and Naruto didn't work out at first wasn't because of self-doubt or insecurity a refreshing take on their relationship (not that there wasn't any invovled). The friends with benefits thing before they realized what they felt for each other added to the depth of their feelings for each other. I completely fell in love. :) brilliant, brilliant work.

Soooo beautiful! I loved your story!

I LOVED THIS STORY! IF ONLY THE MANGA AND ANIME WOULD HAVE GONE IN THAT DIRECTION!...SIGH (

The wording was awful please read it again and listen closely at what you are saying during conversation

Love it, it was a wonderful story.

This was amazing. In true fangirl fashion I squeed over the lemons and cried when you separated my baby kitteys! You cruel woman! I loved it, but I have to say-Mpreg, though illogical, impossible and somewhat idiotic IS AWESOME! I mean, its fucking Naruto! Kurama, Kyuubi, could totally make that shit work for the purposes of a Fanfiction, at least in my opinion. But hey, your way was good too. And who was the mom? If it was Sakura I'm going to puke...just saying...anyway-awesome job. 5 stars.

xxx

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It would be good if you did the same.

Thanks,

Drivven

... that was lovely. i really don't know what else to say. you've kept it as canon as possible, which is a feat in itself, everyone, including sakura and her slight immaturity (no, i don't like her) was very true to the way they actually behave and the relationship between naruto and sasuke was so bitter-sweet and gorgeous and very very artfully portrayed.

cheers,

Naida

OMG It was beautiful! I loved it! I almost started cryin when I thought that Sasuke nd Naruto realy wern't goin 2 b 2gether, but they did nd it was beautiful! It was wonderful, the end was great! They got their children nd Sakura was nice enough to help them b happy!