You mean to make tomo say i did some research

Uhhh, Nagini isn't really saying what naga makes it seem like Nagini is saying. In other words, nagini's words have some mistakes. Just wanted to say that ;p

Amazing! This story is awesome! I've finally finished it and can't wait for the sequel!

This is a mix bag for me.
I like the way you used the main characters for the most part and the realtionship where nice. most of the OC were pretty good and the episode structure of this story really makes it easy to read.
However their are problems depending on how you look at it. I think you used the wrong crossovers and some of OC really screw some characters like Eggman having a son bit shaping his character. and while you do lots of good ideas like Shade and Tikal being sister and super Amy, other were just bad like the devil getting a girlfriend and the sonic unleashed story(didn't hold my interest).
all and all, a good story to look over once, and maybe again to read your favortite episodes

Ahhhhhhhhh! Best story ever, you have no idea how big my grin is! Oh my gosh I was laughing and blushing, and rolling of the floor after reading this!

Well, there are numerous things you can do to make it better, but I already skipped ahead quite a bit so I know that you do improve. I'm just doing this as sort of a reminder. I will review properly once i get a better grasp of the story.

i read this story a long time ago. ive found good stories sence then and have read thim either compleatly or as far as currently possoble. i was looking for another one, and found this. i remembered it from that time about 18 months ago, and remembered it was one of the very first good stories i found on thjs cite so i decide to re-read it. hello again ive come back from long ago to re-read and i will once again enjoy it as one of the best sth fanfics on site. it will bring back the good plot and humor. it is a very good story and i commend for skill in writing it and it has and will continue to bring entertainment to people for a good long time. all i can do is hope u continue the good work.

sincearly: speedox12

So... I'm guessing you don't like Bokkun. -_-

!$#$!%# i had no idea tails was that...deadly! sonic team if you read that, DO NOT make a clip of it!

dude u crazy! 1st sonic alwyes said he wouldnt be caught dead with a gun. 2nd that is so not his dad his parents aren't in that universe.3rd im pritty sure his dad is dead.

cooler! seriously? cooler! that just ain't right!

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I meant the funny parts by the way

Funny. awesome job by the way

did you write this chapter after watching a Pirates of the Carribean marathon too many times in a row?