Great story

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When the fuck will you update this

no words needed here

love it

It all makes sense. Orichi-pedo is the son of a snake. That explains his naturaly snakelike features.

Well, just a hint:
I was scrolling down the search looking for stories.
Suddenly I see: "Naruto, Sakura and Sasuke working there way to become"
so, misspelling something as simple as "their" is not the best of ways to advertise your story _

Jounin senseis should be Jounin Sensei. It's the same plural as singular, as there is no plural in japanese...

Haha man this is one funny epic chapter I hope you finish the story soon and make a sequel

I really want to see what happens next!

Looking forward to next chapter!

Keep up the great work.

awsome

Awesome! )

Interesting story and premise. I believe I have seen several before that deal with Naruto leaving, but yours has a certain... element, that sets it apart. Add to that the twist of who his parents are and him belonging to both the Hyuuga and Uchiha clans, and your story only increases in its draw. I understand how hard it is to force words out, and to get where you want to in a story, as I was never one for writing while in school, not to mention English, but I truly hope to see an eventual update.

Okay I haven't read a single word of this story but I have read any of your other works and when I saw you mention the bands Linkin Park and Three Days Grace I just wanted to congratulate you for being an author with fantastic taste in music.

I LOVE IT! And want much more!

... Really? Hurry up and update.

When I saw that this story hadn't been touched in a year I was at least hoping that it would not end on a cliffhanger. Such an amazing story... You had better update this soon. This is cruel and unusual punishment for making us wait.