Reviews for Hiding in the Open
emowoods205 chapter 19 . 10/16/2017
Not sexual XD I meant Sequel
emowoods205 chapter 19 . 10/16/2017
Awee Sasuke and Naruto are so cute together as friends! I love this book so much too bad there was not even SasuNaru or SasuNaru Sex... Anyways I really enjoyed this please continue writing your amazing! I do think you should make a sequel about how Naruto and Sasuke become a couple and how they get through things in their relationship...But I know your not making a sexual so I'll take this as the end.
emowoods205 chapter 18 . 10/16/2017
I'm glad Sasuke and Naruto are ok. Oh I love Sai so much 3. When Sasuke took care of Naruto during his bad dream 3. Holy crap Orochimaru was going to bury Naruto alive that's evil... I wish they would just say 'I love you' to each other already then become a couple and have lots of sex!
emowoods205 chapter 17 . 10/16/2017
I'm glad Ino understands that Sasuke is in love with Naruto so she'll stop hitting on him. Thank God Sai told Sakura, Sasuke, and Ino everything about Naruto. Sasuke called Naruto is 'Precious person's 3. Holy shit Orochimaru put a dog shock collar on Naruto that's awful... Poor Naruto falling down the stairs and bleeding from his head with a dislocated shoulder... So 'Snake' is Orochimaru! I knew it! I'm so sadhe murdered Kabuto and took his face... He also killed Kabuto's family... That's so sad... So Orochimaru carved the seal symbol into Naruto stomach...That's fucking terrible... Sai going to a shooting range made my fucking day! So Kabuto moved into Sasukes old house...And then he and his family were killed...After that Orochimaru boarded up the windows and took Naruto there? Or did Orochimaru already move to his hide out which happens to be the Old Uchiha house? That moment when Sai and Sasuke were talking to Kyuubi 3. Sasuke getting shot really didn't surprise me I saw that coming...Though I do hope he's ok.
emowoods205 chapter 16 . 10/16/2017
I love Shikamaru for speaking and telling the truth to Choji, Sasuke, Sakura, Kiba, and Ino. XD Choji said Naruto is still very girly. The fact that Sasuke was so worried for Naruto that he even thought Naruto might have run away or killed himself...He really loves Naruto... So now Sai, Itachi, Sasuke, and Tsunade know of Yumi's death and Naruto being taken by 'Snake'... Kabuto was giving me some seriously intense rape vibes. So Kabuto is the 'Snake'...And Naruto recognized that he's the 'Snake'. I hope Kabuto leaves Sasuke alone.
emowoods205 chapter 15 . 10/16/2017
I can't believe everyone knows now.. Poor Naruto.. I like Kanto he obviously still liked Naruto even though he's a boy. I love Sai for being there for Naruto helping him, being there for Naruto through it all Sai is so sweet. Kiba, Sakura, and Ino are so fucking rude! I love Gaara, Neji, Sai, and Hinata 3. Sasuke is such an asshole! IM GOING TO HUNT SASUKE DOWN AND FUCKING MURDER HIM! I love Iruka for being a sweetheart and comforting Naruto. Awe KakaIru! Wait so is Kabuto the 'Snake' or is Orochimaru the 'Snake' or maybe Kabuto is just doing this for Orochimaru? So Kabuto killed Narutos mom in front of him then put a suicide note the gun in her hand to make it look like she killed herself then he kidnapped Naruto...This is out of control!
emowoods205 chapter 14 . 10/16/2017
I love Sai like I really do. Sai is such a sweetheart playing match maker. When Sai said he likes Naruto 3. I'm so happy Sai got Sasuke to go to the party! Sasuke finally admitted to himself he likes Naruto. XD When Naruto saw Neji and Gaara all over each other making out in a drunk haze 3. Naruto has a high tolerance of alcohol I blame Tsunade. XD I love drunk Naruto. Yay Hinata and Kiba were dancing together. XD Naruto danced with Sai that must have been fun. Awee Naruto went and danced with Kanto how cute! I like Kanto...Sasuke was do jealous that he even told Kanto to 'Fuck off' XD. I'm glad that Kanto went to Sasuke and Sai for help. Holy shit those guys that Kanto were hanging out with drugged Naruto and started to molest him taking video they were going to rape him even though he was a boy... I'm glad Sai and Sasuke came in time. Shit does Sasuke know Naruto is a boy now?
emowoods205 chapter 13 . 10/16/2017
Sasuke and Naruto finally accidentally kissed! And Sasuke ran away from the kiss with a blush 3. Naruto liked the kiss getting flutters in his belly 3. I don't think it's a good idea for Tsunade to bring Iruka into this... Because what if Yumi brings up Naruto being a boy. Kiba's finally throwing a party! That sexual tension between Naruto and Sasuke better evaporate at the party! I bet KibaHina, GaaNeji/NejiGaa, SasuNaru and maybe even Sai hooking up with somebody will commence at Kiba's party.
emowoods205 chapter 12 . 10/16/2017
XD Sai and Narutos friendship is so playful Sai groping, flirting, sitting on and trying to kiss Naruto is entertaining. Sasuke was so jelly he couldn't help but throw some snow balls at Sai XD. When Sai groped Narutos ass and Gaara smacked him over the head for it made my day. When Naruto started tickling Sai I smiled like a mad man. I'm literally loveing the SaiNaru movie was probably Naruto and Sasukes tragic love story in the Ninja world. That GaaNaru trust and protectiveness is adorable. I'm hoping for some GaaNeji or NejiGaa. Sai and Narutos little date was cute and funny XD Sai just asked out of the blue if Naruto liked boys or girls...Their little conversation about Narutos sexually, Their playfulness at the park, that deep conversation they had about Sasuke, the kiss they shared (which happend to be Narutos first kiss) was all very amazing!
emowoods205 chapter 11 . 10/16/2017
So Sai is one of Sasukes old friends from his old school. I'm not surprised Sai saw through Narutos disguise so easily he is a cross-dresser too after all. And I'm also not surprised Sai is a as Sasuke said 'flaming gay'. Sai is so nice for not telling the group Naruto is a boy. Sasuke is jealous of Sai being near Naruto even though he doesn't know that Naruto is indeed a boy... I really didn't expect Naruto to tell Sai everything but I'm glad he did. Sai's idea is actually really good I hope it works well. Awe Naruto has never kissed anyone before. When Sai almost kissed Naruto I was fanboying so hard. Fuck I love Sai. 'Bitchy Sasuke's is hilarious XD. Sasuke is literally bringing with jealousy and denial.
emowoods205 chapter 10 . 10/16/2017
So Naruto is going to keep being a girl... It's pretty crazy that Naruto has such screwed up grown ups taking care of him a mentally unstable mom, an alcoholic aunt... I think it's sweet that Sasuke made Naruto feel better without even trying. Sasuke really is working hard to get stronger. The KibaHina was so cute! I'm not surprised Sasuke noticed something was wrong with Naruto. I wonder why Sasuke was so concerned about why Naruto wasn't being himself. I'm surprised Naruto told Sasuke what was really going on. Of course Gaara would pick a scary movie XD. Awee Gaara has a crush on Naruto...He picked the movie on purpose because he thinks Naruto is cute when he's scared and when Temari said this Gaara blushed this is too Adorable! Sasuke was glaring at Gaara XD. When Hinata went to Kiba for comfort I literally 'aweed'. Naruto was sitting in between Gaara and Sasuke XD. Sasuke is really starting to like Naruto as a friendHe smiled and that's rare. I can't believe Yumi forgot all about Naruto that's just...awful... Naruto starting over with his mom is good...I guess... I'm happy that Sasuke and Naruto are good close friends now. XD I'm sorry but a cross-dressing Sai is fucking hilarious.
emowoods205 chapter 9 . 10/16/2017
Poor Naruto having to find out he is the cause of his own mother's suicide attempt... Poor Tsunade drunk and sobbing there's just something about a crying Tsunade that always makes me sad... Now Narutos getting taken away from Yumi so does this mean that he can be a bit again?
emowoods205 chapter 8 . 10/16/2017
I'm glad Naruto and Sasuke are friends now. Awee Sasuke thought Naruto was a cute baby fox. Gaara was probably worried about Naruto. I think Sakura ignouring Ino is stupid like really what the fuck. Awee that part when Naruto glomped Gaara kissing his cheek making Gaara blush 3. InoShikaCho 3. Of course Shikamaru is smart as fuck so he noticed things. I wonder if Yumi died...
emowoods205 chapter 7 . 10/16/2017
Yumi is crazy she needs to be in a Mental home I'm glad Tsunade is giving her a piece of her mind. Poor Naruto not being able to take the news that 'Snake' is back... Yumi Is out of control! I love Kyuubi for taking control and telling Yumi off. Oh so Kyuubi is Narutos split personality that he developed during his kidnapping to help him... When Tsunade slapped Yumi I smiled so much. Holy shit! Yumi stabbed herself I still can't believe it!
emowoods205 chapter 6 . 10/16/2017
I'm glad Naruto got to see his father's grave. XD Itachi likes Naruto because he a 'girl' who doesn't like Sasuke. XD Tsunade left Naruto and Sasuke alone on purpose. Holy crap I didn't notice Jiraiya was the health teacher until now I thought it was Kakashi XD. Sasuke is such a douchebag. I'm glad Naruto stood up for himself ah l love Kyuubi for making him so upset that he made him stand up for himself.
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