Hi

This is one of my favorite fics, and it was so long! It's quite rare to see fics so long and I absolutely enjoyed it.

I enjoyed the story, it was funny but a bit immature and fluffy. It seemed Albus suddenly turned feminine all of a sudden to me though. One thing I caught was Scorpius saying," Jesus you look good in those jeans." But later saying he knew nothing about the "muggle deities." But I really liked Riley, he was a great original character and you described him so well. He and Phil were a cute couple, as were Al and Scorpius. Overall it was enjoyable!

I loved your story, but I'm really curious about what is going on with James and June. Are they a thing? Do they end up together? Also does Yuna end up with anyone? You should write a sequal where they are out of hogwarts and Scorpius' younger sibling is born because I'm curious about them too. His grandfather should be dead because without him I feel Scorpius could at least start to mend the hole between him and his parents.

Thank you so much for writing this story, it was so good. I especially love riley and phil they are super cute. Bravo.

interesting beginning. I look forward to how this may develop.

This makes me happy.

Epilogue?

With one more full moon night, maybe Al and Scorpius can move in together, Scorpius can meet his little sister (because there is no way Karma is kind enough to the Malfoy family to let them have more than one son per generation to "continue the family line"), James might finally admit that he has been dating June and really likes her, Phil and Riley...we just need more of them because they rock the sock drawer.

And you only wrote 39 chapters...wanna round that out to 40 (nudgenudge winkwink)

This story was fabulous! I'm sorry for not reviewing, but I was too caught in it, and when I took breaks, it was because I had to go somewhere.
I'm starting to really like the couple Albus/Scorpius, which was not the case at the beginning, and your story helped a lot! There was a big development between the former, bad Scorpius, and the new, nice one :) Well, it was great. :) As usual.

"All he had to do now was bring up the topic of liking men." Easy!
And I would have loved to see Ron with his hair turning white! I love your style, it's refreshing.

It's really interesting to read a story with a Scorpius who is not a good little boy so unlike his father when he was a teenager. He's maybe a bit too much like his father, on the contrary, in the way he speaks. We'll see how it goes! :)

Scorpius is a werewolf! I like it :D Phil and Riley are so sweet
Great fic!

Oh Merlin I really hope Riley and Phil end up together…

You have no idea how much I love Riley. And I totally ship him with Phil. Definitely. "You can't take the doll and the teddy."
"Oh yeah? Watch me."
I just love that.
It was so funny I almost shit kittens. (story reference :D )

I wish you'd freaking tell us whose POV it it. Like this line right here: "It wasn't like she'd done anything." WHO? I hate having to take a few minutes to find out. And I had to re-read that bit in Mcgonnagal's POV about THREE times. Argg. I'm not even pms-ing.