Amazing story!

Interesting. If it saved Dean, I think he'd do it.

One, two, three, four, five. Dean breathed into Sam’s mouth. One, two, three, four, five. “Come on, Sammy, god damnit!” Once again, Dean tilted Sam’s head back and attempted to breath for his little brother. One—“Come on, Sammy, don’t do this to me!”—two—“Breath, Sam!”—three—“Not again, please, please not again…”—four—“I played by your rules! I didn’t weasel my way out if it! Bring him back, damnit!”—five—“Bring him back, now!” One, two, three, four, five. “You little bitch, how could you do this to me?” One, two, three, four five. “I hate you, Sam. I hate you!” One, two, three, four, five. “SAM!”

Oh my lord.

This entire paragraph brought tears to my eyes, honestly.

I don't get sappy like that, but actually picturing Dean yelling profanities at his brother to get him to wake up...oh...it was perfect.

So, so perfect.

This was so well done. I cannot believe it.

The entire concept.

You blew me away, hun.

Wow, Haley. Seems like you're back and kicking with SN fics! GREAT! Between you and me, this is what I'm hoping for. You know to get Dean out of the deal. Evil, huh?

Yikes. Quite a punch. I love it. Catch ya on the flip side.

Amazingly written!

oh god no.. shit.. :o I'm in shock x)

Well I knew what the ending was going to be as soon as I read "and a bit of Evil!Sam" but I still loved it. It would make a nice beginning to a story but seeing its a one-shot well that hope crashed and burned. Still liked it.

And it was actually heartwrenchingly perfect...

Soo good. I thought Sam was dead! I really did! Didn't see the last bit coming. Tbh I thought Dean was very in character - you'd so expect him to go Ape Shit if he though Sam died for him after he was already going to die for Sam. Very well done - favs!

Very creepy! Sam's right - they both live then. I'll be really curious how Sam gets Dean out of the deal, but this would be a cool start to season 4, no?

Nice work!

:D

Caroline

Woah. Did NOT see that coming.

Amazing fic, loved this line: "He was stuck in his own little ‘Sammy world’ as he stared at the floor. God, Dean hated that world. Nothing good ever came of it. "

Oh holy crap! That's awful but brilliant at the same time! I love the way you've written the two brothers so well. And the whole premise of Dean's weariness a few months down the line is so true. Telling Sammy the clause in the deal should have put an end to it. But not our stubborn Sammy.

And if this is truly a way to get out of the deal, I think you might have tapped into a Kripke possibility! It's just the sort of twist those guys love to tear at our hearts with!

Nicely done!